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elp my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。本題屬于材料作文,主要講述你喜歡的學(xué)科、原因以及你從你選擇的學(xué)科中學(xué)到了什么。注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用,靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語(yǔ)和句型。切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章,很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。條理清晰。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科(體育、剪紙和廚藝),并解釋愿意以及收獲,最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對(duì)他的生活的意義。:?jiǎn)卧~短語(yǔ):like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí),形容詞放后面。高分句型:That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí),形容詞放后面等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10.H解析:My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題,介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式,給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在,我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),并對(duì)將來(lái)提出兩點(diǎn)希望。審題可知,作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了,需要注意的是在描寫(xiě)過(guò)去的時(shí)候,需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn);還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開(kāi)想象,合理發(fā)揮,注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來(lái),內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一,符合題目要求,合情合理。表達(dá)時(shí),需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句,而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來(lái)表達(dá)。注意句式的多變,長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用,提升文章的檔次。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者按照題目要求,介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)的變化。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序,先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的面貌,這一部分使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都變成了過(guò)去式,形式準(zhǔn)確。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子,這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整,敘述清晰、條理,結(jié)構(gòu)合理。文章中語(yǔ)言得體,語(yǔ)句通順,句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型,如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。11.C解析:iPads, ing into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根據(jù)題目要求,需要書(shū)寫(xiě)一篇議論文,探討iPad進(jìn)課堂這一現(xiàn)象,以及人們對(duì)此的不同觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度。文章需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第三人稱。結(jié)合觀點(diǎn)式議論文的段落格式,首先在第一段提出問(wèn)題現(xiàn)象,第二段表達(dá)支持這種行為做法的原因和好處,第三段描述反對(duì)人的觀點(diǎn)及原因,最后一段表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。注意多使用固定短語(yǔ),固定句型,使文章增色。點(diǎn)睛:對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式第一段:提出現(xiàn)象。第二段:SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat_______________________支持X的第一個(gè)原因。Theyalsoarguethat_____________________________支持X的另一個(gè)原因。第三段:However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat________________________反對(duì)X的第一個(gè)理由。Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:________________一個(gè)例子。第四段:Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabovementionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX的有一個(gè)壞處。12.D解析:Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette (禮儀). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信?!驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國(guó)的文化。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意不要漏寫(xiě)。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語(yǔ)。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主,首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求,對(duì)所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括,去粗取精;在寫(xiě)作時(shí)目的要明確,要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等??梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。本篇文章寫(xiě)的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette(禮儀),中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦。13.D解析:Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。m interested