【正文】 I want./ I think it’s fun./ I think it was a busy weekend等賓語從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（內(nèi)蒙古根河市阿龍山中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動，你們班開張了一次主題班會。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運(yùn)動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。常識歷史悠久，深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊精神考生自擬（至少一點(diǎn)）偶像梅西，有足球天賦夢想考生自擬（至少一點(diǎn)）注意：1。詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2。短文須包括所有 要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. ____________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運(yùn)動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m very excited to hear that……；It is liked by……；it helps……，I’m……，My dream is……，I hope…....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了關(guān)于足球的常識，接下來介紹踢足球的好處以及我的偶像，最后介紹我的夢想。此處have a very long history, all over the world, take place, take part in, what’s more, be good for, have a gift for等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)正在舉辦英語征文比賽，請你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語以“Learn to Smile”為題寫一篇短文，參加比賽。生活中會有不愉快的事，如：……對自己微笑使你開心、恢復(fù)自信；使你忘掉煩惱。對他人微笑使人與人更親近，帶來友誼。微笑是一種人人易懂的語言。注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐句翻譯；2．表格中省略部分須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3．詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude （態(tài)度） to life．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了大量短語，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。同時Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時，可把提示內(nèi)容結(jié)合實(shí)際展開合理的想象，把它們翻譯拓展成一個個英文句子。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見的短語，會給習(xí)作增色。18．（福建中考模擬）親愛的初三同學(xué)，考試來臨，畢業(yè)在即，你遇到了人生路上的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，你的生活、學(xué)習(xí)平添了一些煩惱和壓力。當(dāng)前正確面對煩惱，有效緩解心理壓力非常重要。請以＂How to solve our stress＂為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀阍谏?、學(xué)習(xí)方面的煩惱和壓力，以及要如何面對困難，解決問題的方法。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要求：內(nèi)容完整；書寫規(guī)范；語法準(zhǔn)確；語句通順連貫。 參考詞：stress（壓力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，help How to solve our stressThe entrance examination is ing. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these 【答案】How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。 And we should also learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we had better see a doctor.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。要求以＂How to solve our stress＂為題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀阍谏?、學(xué)習(xí)方面的煩惱和壓力，以及要如何面對困難，解決問題的方法。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。根據(jù)所給的材料可知本文時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫，主語為第一人稱，寫作時要注意主謂一致的問題。在寫作的時候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。參考詞：stress （ 壓力） , nervous，sleep , time , healthy , smile , sports， help可以用到的短語有： take part in 參加； municate with sb. 和某人交流； try one39。s best to do sth. 盡全力做某事； too much 太多。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，抓住重點(diǎn)，理順要點(diǎn)。草擬提綱，分清各要點(diǎn)之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系，尋求邏輯次序，分出層次，確定如何下手，使表達(dá)內(nèi)容條理清楚。在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。19．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。你向往的高中生活即將開始，你將面對新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境，請根據(jù)下列提示，以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文environmentclassroom, dining hall, library,…studylearning goals, learning ways,…activitiesduring school time, in the free time,…relationshipclassmates, teachers,…other expectations…要求：，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，注意句子之間的銜接。、地名及能夠透露你個人身份的信息。詞數(shù)：90110 詞左右。I Expect My Senior High School Life 【答案】I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go ther