【正文】 er than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，題目中有三張圖片，展示了九年級的學生們在為體育測試做準備，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)圖片，以Never give up為題，寫一篇文章，簡要描述三個畫面，并談一談自己的想法。寫作之前，應(yīng)仔細觀察圖片，看清楚圖片展示的內(nèi)容，三張圖片展示了三個體育項目，跑步、鉛球和跳遠，寫作時，應(yīng)使用形象、直觀的語言，詳細介紹圖片中的內(nèi)容，然后組織語言，串聯(lián)成文。文章可以分兩段，第一段介紹圖片內(nèi)容，第二段談?wù)撟约旱南敕?。題目中有詞匯的提示，寫作時應(yīng)注意使用。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達的需要確定應(yīng)使用的時態(tài)。注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文的描述符合圖片中的內(nèi)容，敘述非常詳細，并對圖片展開了合理的想象，使文章的內(nèi)容更加豐富。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想，升華了文章的主題。其次短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習慣，語法規(guī)范，語言得體。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，正確使用了謂語動詞的形式。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、定語從句等復(fù)合句，提升了文章檔次和水平，整篇文章表達流暢。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。15．（山東中考模擬）寫作讀萬卷書,行萬里路。為幫助中小學生了解國情、熱愛祖國、開闊眼界、增長知識,提高社會責任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力,教育部倡導(dǎo)開展“研學旅行 （study tour）”活動。你校也計劃開展此項活動,但是有些學生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對。請你以 My Opinions onStudy Tour為題,寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒄f明理由。要求,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。、校名:80100（文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）。可參考以下詞匯the sense of social responsibility社會責任感。 creative spirit創(chuàng)新精神。 practical ability實踐能力My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forStudents 【答案】My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forstudents so that they can have a better understanding of life and students are crazy about such tours while others show their great concerns.Personally ,I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study of the time,studennts acquire knowledge and skills from walking out of the campus,they can learn through their own experiences and can understand better about what they have learned from textbooks. Besides,study tours contribute a lot to shaping a student’s life values and bee more confident in getting along with also helps students develop the sense of social responsibility, creative spirit and practical ability.Of course,we must put safety in the first place in the course of study tour,which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.【解析】1. 本題為話題作文，給定的話題為My Opinions on Study Tour. 研學旅行之我見。2. 寫出我們學校組織這次學習旅游的目的, 是讓學生對生活和社會有一個更好的了解。 3. 介紹學生對這次研學旅行的看法，有些學生表示歡迎，也有些表示反對。 4. 具體介紹本人的觀點。（1）對培養(yǎng)學生的學習興趣起著至關(guān)重要的作用。（2）可以通過自己的經(jīng)驗和觀察來學習。（3）學習旅游有助于塑造學生的人生價值觀和個性，使他們更加自信地與他人相處，也有助于培養(yǎng)學生的社會責任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力。5. 最后要提出安全的要求。我們必須把安全放在第一位。 6. 時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。人稱較為靈活。 16．（山東中考模擬）書面表達隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和手機終端發(fā)展，成癮性網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲使一些中學生沉迷其中，影響了學習進步和身心健康。上周你們學校開展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many puter games ”為主題的專題討論。請根據(jù)下表中的要點提示，寫一篇短文，提出一些意見。學校要做些什么；，如運動會，外出游玩等；, ……； 家長要做些什么，多陪伴，……；，……；學生要做些什么……（至少兩點）注意 ，可適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；，短文開頭已給出，不計總詞數(shù)；；Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many puter games .The students have different opinions.【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many puter games. The students have different opinions. They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can municate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must e first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭。我們只要用英語正確的把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點就行。動筆前要真人閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目要求，短文是一篇議論文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第三人稱。寫作中要注意適當使用連詞，注意上下文緊密聯(lián)系。符合邏輯關(guān)系。高分句型【1】They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他們認為他們的學校可以開班會，幫助他們認識到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利與弊。動詞不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the 。高分句型【2】Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外，學校應(yīng)該定期舉辦有益的校外活動。此句是含有情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)。其構(gòu)成為：情態(tài)動詞+be+及物動詞的過去分詞。高分句型【3】Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 與學校緊密合作是家長幫助他們的另一重要途徑。動名詞Working closely with schools作主語，視作單數(shù)，因此be動詞用is。17．（江蘇中考模擬）假如你叫Sandy，你收到了你的英文筆友Lucy的來信。請你用英文給她寫一封回信，針對她的問題，談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并給出可行的建議。Dear Sandy, I am very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers,ice creams and potato chips,but we are not allowed to order them according to the school rules. I usually have little for lunch and I often feel tired and can39。t follow the teachers in the afternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible.Yours sincerely,Lucy注意事項:，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Lucy,I am glad to receive your letter.