【正文】 mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.【解析】【分析】這是一篇看圖作文，介紹我們?cè)谝淮闻郎竭^(guò)程中保護(hù)環(huán)境，撿拾垃圾?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We felt……，When we got to……，we cleaned……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我們決定去爬山，接下來(lái)介紹我們?cè)谏巾斏习l(fā)現(xiàn)垃圾，然后撿拾垃圾，最后表達(dá)我們的感受。此處set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀。你打算邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語(yǔ): school gate, 8:00, invention, experiment, knowledge, notebook, food and drink提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文，要求就學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀的事情，寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。要注意郵件的寫作格式，根據(jù)題目要求可判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)76. 連云港開展了“真閱讀”工程，為了讓閱讀進(jìn)校園，為了營(yíng)造一種“多讀書，讀好書”的良好氛圍，你班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過(guò)的好書（the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason…），并談?wù)勛约旱母形?。注意?. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100個(gè)詞左右，講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。A good book that influenced me a lotBoys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過(guò)的好書。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我讀過(guò)的一本好書的名字，接下來(lái)介紹我讀這本書的時(shí)間，所讀的內(nèi)容以及閱讀這本書的原因，最后鼓勵(lì)大家多讀好書。此處by doingsth, e across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的不斷發(fā)展，傳統(tǒng)的學(xué)習(xí)模式受到?jīng)_擊?！熬W(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”這一新的學(xué)習(xí)模式備受青睞。假設(shè)你是陳欣，最近某英文雜志正在討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該通過(guò)網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行在線學(xué)習(xí)。以下是你所在班級(jí)的討論情況，請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)投稿，反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕āＬ崾荆河^點(diǎn)贊成反對(duì)理由1. 網(wǎng)上資源（resource）豐富2. 可以自由（freedom）選擇學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和時(shí)間1. 網(wǎng)上信息太多，有些不真實(shí)2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用電腦對(duì)眼睛不好要求：詞數(shù)不少于80詞，稿件的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。向子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”為話題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、讓步狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。18．（湖南省岳陽(yáng)開發(fā)區(qū)長(zhǎng)嶺中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。現(xiàn)在提倡全民閱讀，某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以”reading”為題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向該網(wǎng)站投稿。提示：？？？要求：80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Reading _