【正文】 t sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談談自己的感受?！驹斀狻?，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要緊扣主題，文句通順?！芭懿健?，正文部分詳細地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結構清晰，前后呼應。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語從句so…that …；比較級do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語多彩、文句表達多樣。 ”9．書面表達為了配合“足球進校園”活動，你們班開展了一次主題班會。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示，用英語向同學們介紹足球這項運動并談談自己的夢想。常 識歷史悠久，深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團隊精神考生自擬（至少1點）偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢 想考生自擬（至少1點）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；、校名等相關信息。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．Thank you for your attention．【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運動并談談自己的夢想。要求仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三個方面來寫：介紹足球運動及其好處；說說自己的偶像；談談自己的夢想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。寫作亮點：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達清楚；同時，本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達生動；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。10．書面表達?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學（結果見下表）。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點。同學主要觀點你的觀點努力學習尊重父母服務社會計劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；（2）你的觀點至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學參與討論，寫出他們的觀點及自己的觀點。因為是敘述同學的現(xiàn)在的觀點，所以句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學的觀點用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子?？键c：材料作文。