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f this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外,還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。文章條理分明,三個要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚,并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。:短語:as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。句型:被動句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,主語從句。9.書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫一封信,說說你的計劃。活動畢業(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講;2.互贈禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,語法正確,書寫整潔。 ,開頭結(jié)尾己給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。10.根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100詞. 豐富的校本課程可以讓你的生活更精彩.請根據(jù)下列圖示中所提供的特色課程,按內(nèi)容及要求,用英文完成寫作.內(nèi)容包括:1.Whichcourse(s)doyoulike?2.Whydoyoulikeit/them?3.Whatcanyoulearnfromit/them?寫作要求:1.依據(jù)你的興趣選擇課程(數(shù)量不限);2.短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名及姓名. Ofallthecourses,Ilike __________________________.【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。本題屬于材料作文,主要講述你喜歡的學(xué)科、原因以及你從你選擇的學(xué)科中學(xué)到了什么。注意時態(tài)的運(yùn)用,靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語和句型。切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章,很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。條理清晰。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科(體育、剪紙和廚藝),并解釋愿意以及收獲,最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對他的生活的意義。:單詞短語:like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時,形容詞放后面。高分句型:That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語從句?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時,形容詞放后面等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。