【正文】 很 有 成 就 感 的 一 件 事 情 ，主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :你 取 得 了 什 么 成就 ，你 是 如 何 做 到 的 ，以 及 你 在 取 得 成 就 的 過(guò) 程 中 學(xué) 到 了 什 么 ?話題作文寫(xiě)出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語(yǔ)法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯?xiě)出確切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。 translate into 把翻譯成；in order to為了； used to do過(guò)去常常做某事15．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫(xiě)作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀。你打算邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語(yǔ): school gate, 8:00, invention, experiment, knowledge, notebook, food and drink提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文，要求就學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀的事情，寫(xiě)一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。要注意郵件的寫(xiě)作格式，根據(jù)題目要求可判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。16．（北京中考模擬）友誼是焦渴時(shí)的甘泉， 黑暗中的明燈； 友誼是快樂(lè)時(shí)的分享， 憂傷時(shí)的撫慰……某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展“ Friendship”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阕钫湟暤囊欢斡颜x，主要內(nèi)容包括：你最好的朋友是誰(shuí)，你們?nèi)绾纬蔀楹门笥训模约澳銥槭裁凑湟暷銈冎g的友誼。提示詞語(yǔ)：in trouble, help, encourage, together, treasure, happy提示問(wèn)題：Who is your best friend?How did you bee best friends?Why do you treasure the friendship between you?As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyone39。s life. Friends are your part of life. Friends make you believe that there really is good in the world. My best friend is Mary. When I am down, she lifts me up. When I lose my way, she guides me and cheer me on. So cherish your friend, Do not save your loving speeches for your friends. With the help of friends, your life is colourful.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，“ Friendship”為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勎易钫湟暤囊欢斡颜x。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I believe that……，F(xiàn)riendship is ……，F(xiàn)riends are……，When I lose……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了友誼的重要性，接下來(lái)介紹我的一段友誼，最后指出如何對(duì)待你的朋友。此處lift sb up, lose one’s way, cheer sb on, with the help of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（江蘇中考模擬）某英語(yǔ)報(bào)開(kāi)展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的提示內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?. 積極思考，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)2. 及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，防止遺忘過(guò)重的壓力1. 無(wú)法入睡，非常疲憊2. 害怕考試，導(dǎo)致失敗應(yīng)對(duì)的措施1. 合理計(jì)劃，準(zhǔn)備充分2. ……注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 表格最后一欄中省略部分須用12句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。How to deal with the exam stressEveryone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to Deal with the Exam StressEveryone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．However，if we have too heavy stress，we can39。t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．In my opinion，to deal with stress，we39。d better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we39。ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams． 【解析】試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)以“How to deal with the exam stress”為題寫(xiě)一篇作文。在題目中給出了一張表格，需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將表格中的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。分析表格可以看到，這篇作文的內(nèi)容主要有三個(gè)方面，第一個(gè)是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?duì)我們是有好處的；第二個(gè)是過(guò)多的壓力對(duì)我們有害；最后發(fā)表自己的看法，如何來(lái)應(yīng)對(duì)壓力。因此這篇作文可以分為三段來(lái)寫(xiě)，這樣可以使整個(gè)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)有層次。在每一段中加上具體的內(nèi)容，使段落更加充實(shí)。最后還要補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)自己的觀點(diǎn)。全文需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。注意多使用一些好的句式、短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。作者按照題目要求把表格中的內(nèi)容完整的表達(dá)出來(lái)，并加上了自己的看法。作者將整篇短文分成了三個(gè)部分，首先寫(xiě)的是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?duì)我們有利。這里作者主要使用的句型或短語(yǔ)有besides，還用到了一些復(fù)合句，如條件狀語(yǔ)從句等；接下來(lái)作者寫(xiě)的是過(guò)多的壓力的害處，段首先用however來(lái)進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)折，然后使用了一個(gè)復(fù)合句ifwehavetooheavystress,wecan’tsleepwellatnightandwemayfeel too，但是