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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容,首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀,然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因,最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型,以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤,為使句子具有連貫性,可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整,符合材料要求,Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級;Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性,條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用,比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性,是一篇不錯的文章。10.書面表達(dá)中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。請根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息,將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。BritainAustraliaTimeJuly 1 July 14TimeAugust 15 August 24Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace (白金漢宮) visit the British Museum (大英博物館)watch football matches…Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera Housetravel around the Gold Coast (黃金海岸)have fun with kangaroos and koalas…Attentionchangeable weatherAttentionwinterCost20,000 yuanCost16,000 yuan要求:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括某一國家的所有信息及選擇的理由; 2. 結(jié)合游玩國家的情況,自擬希望可以安排的活動,并提出12點(diǎn)出游的注意事項(xiàng);3. 文章不少于90詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4. 語義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范;5. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動筆寫作。在寫作時,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。