【正文】 ________________________________________________________________How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【答案】Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【解析】這是一篇回復(fù)書信類的提綱作文。內(nèi)容為根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容及自己的實(shí)際情況回復(fù)郵件。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：你一切都好嗎？你覺得你的英語課怎么樣？當(dāng)你遇到麻煩時，你會找誰去幫忙？在動筆前，要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)列出每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作。在寫作時，需要注意書信體裁的格式，要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；注意表達(dá)的條理性、連貫性，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡符合邏輯關(guān)系；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。15．（江蘇中考模擬） 書面表達(dá)共享單車（shared bikes）在蘇州投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質(zhì)的‘“照妖鏡”，請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢，出行方便，減少污染 ，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題 你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……（考生自擬，至少2點(diǎn)）注意事項：，要求語句通順，意思連貫。“你的觀點(diǎn)”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達(dá)出來，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達(dá)流暢。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個寫作要點(diǎn)要面面俱到，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時，人稱為第一人稱，因為文章涉及的內(nèi)容是曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事情，所以時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過去時來描述發(fā)，寫感想可以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄 did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent ，而不是遲鈍或心不在焉。①as…as possible盡可能…②instead of 代替 而不是，后跟動名詞?！靖叻志湫投緼s we know，practice makes perfect我們都知道，熟能生巧。practice makes perfect熟能生巧，諺語的運(yùn)用，為文章增添了色彩。17．（福建中考模擬）書面表達(dá)91. 年3月9日，福建省教育廳在其網(wǎng)站發(fā)布《關(guān)于推遲中小學(xué)早上上學(xué)改革的相關(guān)舉措征求意見》，向公眾征求意見和建議。你所在的學(xué)校就此進(jìn)行了網(wǎng)上問卷調(diào)查，其中有92%的同學(xué)表示贊成，請根據(jù)下圖提示，寫一篇80字左右的短文，闡述你贊成的理由。參考詞匯：delay 要求：1. 必須包含所有提示信息，開頭已給次，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范 3. 請勿在文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的信息。Delay starting time for school Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here aer my reasons.【答案】Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here are my reasons.First of all, delaying starting time a