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y,I am glad to receive your letter. Yours,Sandy【答案】Dear Lucy,I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand your feeling and I39。m worried about your health and your study. Here are some suggestions for you.First, hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips are bad for your health, so you had better give up the thought that you want to eat them at school. Second, try to eat as much school lunch as possible in order to have enough energy. Try your best and everything will be all right soon. Finally, if there is really something wrong with the school lunch, you can talk to your teachers and help improve it. It39。s not only for yourself, but also for the whole school. Good luck. Yours,Sandy【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式,采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái),注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫,有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛:這封信使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如;be worried about;be bad fo as as possible 。Try one’s best; in order to; not only but also等;First;Second, Finally,等的運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。15.(廣東中考模擬)隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展,通訊的方式從遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代的書信到當(dāng)今的互聯(lián)網(wǎng),經(jīng)歷著巨大的變化。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。內(nèi)容包括:1. 你喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些?2. 它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么?3. 你認(rèn)為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么?要求:1. 不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名;2. 語(yǔ)意連貫,詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,談?wù)勎覍?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:there are……,I prefer to……,Mobile phones bring……,we can……,we should……,So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些;接下來(lái)介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么,以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么;最后呼吁號(hào)召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是第一中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生,5月21日是學(xué)校開放日,學(xué)校邀請(qǐng)家長(zhǎng)來(lái)校聽課參觀。你作為志愿者參與了開放日活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以“The School Open Day”為題,寫一篇90詞左右的英文報(bào)道。內(nèi)容提示如下:1.家長(zhǎng)們聽了很多堂課,高度評(píng)價(jià)老師精湛的教學(xué)技能;2.王芳老師的音樂(lè)課有趣而活躍,成功地融合了傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代音樂(lè);3.張陽(yáng)老師的歷史課把抗日戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)栩栩如生地呈現(xiàn)到課堂上,講述了八十年前中華兒女如何與日本鬼子勇敢戰(zhàn)斗;4.家長(zhǎng)們都感到……并希望……(參考詞匯:抗日戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)the AntiJapanese War)注意事項(xiàng):1.文章須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫;2.第4個(gè)要點(diǎn)須用2至3句話展開合理想象,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.詞數(shù)90左右.倡議書的開頭已在答題卡上給出。不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4.文章內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。The School Open DayNo. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st.Many parents were invited to your school.I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The School Open DayNo. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st.Many parents were invited to our school.I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together.Parents listened to many lessons.They spoke very highly of teachers39。 excellent teaching skills.The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting.She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together.The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the AntiJapanese War alive in class.He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 80 years ago.Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers39。 hard work and personal charm.They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities.【解析】這篇作文以學(xué)校開放日為題,邀請(qǐng)家長(zhǎng)來(lái)校聽課參觀,你作為志愿者參與了學(xué)校開放日活動(dòng)。根據(jù)材料寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括:1. 你帶領(lǐng)家長(zhǎng)參觀美麗的校園,并一同觀看了升國(guó)旗儀式。2. 家長(zhǎng)們聽了很多堂課,高度評(píng)價(jià)老師精湛的教學(xué)技能。3. 王芳老師的音樂(lè)課有趣而活躍,成功地融合了傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代音樂(lè)。4. 張陽(yáng)老師的歷史課把抗日戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)栩栩如生呈現(xiàn)到課堂上,講述了七十年前中華兒女如何與日本鬼子勇敢戰(zhàn)斗。5. 家長(zhǎng)們都感到……并希望……最后要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2到3句話展開合理想象,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí),我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行合理的整理與安排,使文章的意思銜接更自然。當(dāng)然要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞,使文章上下文連貫自然合理。17.(全國(guó)中考模擬)假如你校正在開展“讀好書,促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題,用英語(yǔ)寫一份倡議書,向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議,號(hào)召大家參與此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。閱讀現(xiàn)狀1. 沒(méi)有閱讀的習(xí)慣,不知道讀什么。2. 作業(yè)太多,沒(méi)有足夠的時(shí)間閱讀。3. 寧愿把空閑時(shí)間花在電腦游戲上。你的情況熱愛閱讀,學(xué)校閱讀俱樂(lè)部的成員。從閱讀中獲得了很多知識(shí)。自去年9月以來(lái),已看了10多本書。你的想法……注意事項(xiàng):,要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫;“你的想法”一欄中須圍繞主題,用23句話展開合理想象,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;,短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已在答題卡上給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);。Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. Come on, everyone! Let’s start reading now!【答案】Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They don’t know what to read.