【正文】 a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green ______________________________ ____________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoidthe traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a fortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can alsosave the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.【解析】本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述。實(shí)際上就是要求書(shū)寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)。人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. 通過(guò)騎自行車(chē)或步行，這樣就可以避免交通阻塞，減少空氣污染。and是并列連詞，連接的是兩個(gè)相同的謂語(yǔ)，by是介詞，意思是通過(guò)某組織方式。高分句型二：In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活中，無(wú)論我走到哪里，我會(huì)撿垃圾，把垃圾放進(jìn)垃圾箱里。pick up是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是撿起，put into是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是放進(jìn)wherever引導(dǎo)的是讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，從句的意思是無(wú)論我到哪里。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)你校正開(kāi)展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大討論活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合生活實(shí)際寫(xiě)一封英語(yǔ)小短文介紹有關(guān)情況，以幫助他人安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)。短文內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)方面：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。如，和家長(zhǎng)有所約定，不向strangers透露（give out）真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息，不單獨(dú)和net friend見(jiàn)面，使用文明語(yǔ)言，等等。希望……要求：詞數(shù)不少于100。 信中須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。 文章中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的方式。寫(xiě)作中學(xué)生需要緊密貼合題干中已經(jīng)給出的要點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊，利弊都要寫(xiě)出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長(zhǎng)有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息，不單獨(dú)和網(wǎng)友見(jiàn)面，使用文明語(yǔ)言，等等。學(xué)生可以在這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)上整理自己的語(yǔ)言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實(shí)用的祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)。最后收尾要寫(xiě)出自己的希望。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結(jié)尾提出了倡議，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你的筆友 John 將作為交換生在中國(guó)家庭生活一周，他寫(xiě)了一封 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范； 80 左右，郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear John,向你求助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容寫(xiě)封回信。Dear Li Hua,I will e to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?Please write back soon.Yours, JohnDear John,I’m glad you will e to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,I39。m glad you will e to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don39。t need to worry about it.If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It39。s not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that.In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means Nice to meet you, Thank you and so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What39。s more, read some books about Chinese customs before ing here. Try not to make any misunderstandings.I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，回信給約翰，建議他在中國(guó)家庭生活應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，二人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。m glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It39。s not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭告訴他不必?fù)?dān)心，接下來(lái)回答他的問(wèn)題以及建議他如何做，最后希望他在中國(guó)玩得高興。此處need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（湖北中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關(guān)系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會(huì)普遍對(duì)90后，00后有一些誤解， 認(rèn)為他們自私、無(wú)禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學(xué)生，你又是怎么看待這個(gè)問(wèn)題的呢? 請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自己和周?chē)瑢W(xué)的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點(diǎn)和兩條不足之處進(jìn)行描述。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。【答案】As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new