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ll you go?What will you do in this activity?What do you advise Peter to prepare for this activity?Dear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li HuaDear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear PeterHow is it going?I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.I’m looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文,屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認真閱讀要點,寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向,寫作要點為:1. 志愿者活動的時間和地點。2. 活動中做些什么。3. 建議彼得為這次活動做哪些準備。然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。16.(北京中考模擬)我區(qū)正在全力創(chuàng)建全國文明城區(qū)。假如你是李華,上周日參加了學校組織的志愿活動。請你用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿,談?wù)勀銈內(nèi)チ四睦?,你做了什么,以及你的感受。提示詞語:Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, tired,proud提示問題:● Where did you go? ● What did you do?● How did you feel?Last Sunday 【答案】Last Sunday I participated in “build a civilized city”activitity in Muhu Park. It39。s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don39。t throw litter or spit about. It39。s good manners to say Thank you and Please and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we39。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public. I think we should put up posters to tell people how to behave well to build a civilized city. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more we are tired,we had a good time.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文,介紹周日參加的學校組織的志愿活動。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;以提示的問題作為寫作的主線,重點從三個方面去寫作:???結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第一人稱,運用一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述。在談到自己感受的時候用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。17.(山東中考模擬)初中生活即將結(jié)束,學校英語俱樂部特邀你寫一篇英語短文,給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議。內(nèi)容要點如下:1. 初中科目更多,好的學習方法很重要;2. 鍛煉身體,保持健康;3. 參加社團活動,使學校生活豐富;4. 多讀書,多交朋友;5. 補充一兩點個人想法。注意:1. 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;2. 詞數(shù):60-80;3. 內(nèi)容連貫,不要逐條翻譯;4. 短文的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:method n. 方法 club n.社團 colorful Wele to our school!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文,自己即將畢業(yè),給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議。結(jié)合所給的材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,以第一人稱為主,要注意主謂一致,所寫的句子要符合英語語法,用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式,如:graduate from畢業(yè)于;share sth with sb和某人分享某事;wait for等候等,用來一些過渡詞或短語,如:Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等,上下文銜接很自然。18.(四川成都外國語學校中考模擬)Writing.In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?Now please write a passage of about 80120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.【答案】First of all, twochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, twochild policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如first of all,grow up,grow older,marry with,burden on,have to do, take care of,by oneself,have no playmate,the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and t