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Come on, everyone! Let’s start reading now!【答案】Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They don’t know what to read. Sometimes there is too much homework to do, so they don’t have time to read. What’s worse, they would rather spend their free time on puter games. I love reading and I’m in the school Reading Club. I got a lot of knowledge through reading. I have read over ten books since last September. I think reading helps open up a whole new world to us. I’m sure reading will be popular as time goes on!Come on, Everyone! Let’s start reading now!【解析】 這是一篇圖表,你校正在開(kāi)展“讀好書(shū),促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū),向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議,號(hào)召大家參與此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫。 the reading habit閱讀習(xí)慣;spend their free time on puter games把空閑時(shí)間花在電腦游戲上;15.(安徽中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校打算舉辦一場(chǎng)以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),給你的美國(guó)筆友Mike 寫(xiě)一封郵件,介紹這次的活動(dòng)。時(shí)間:5月30號(hào)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容: 1. 給老師獻(xiàn)花致敬;2. 把寫(xiě)滿感謝祝福話語(yǔ)的卡片貼在墻上;3. 為老師表演節(jié)目(put on performances)你的感觸:……注意: 1. 詞數(shù)80100;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;4. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:Our school will hold……,On the day we will……,We thank them for……,I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我們學(xué)校舉行了一個(gè)感恩老師的活動(dòng),接下來(lái)介紹我們的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容,最后表達(dá)我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16.(重慶中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)格林(Green) 先生是你班的一位外籍教師,在他回國(guó)前夕,學(xué)校將為他舉行歡送會(huì)。請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g送辭,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:1. 格林先生是澳大利亞人,三年前來(lái)到我校教英語(yǔ);2. 他與我們相處融洽,但對(duì)我們要求嚴(yán)格;3. 這些年來(lái),…… 我們深表感激;4. 下星期他將離?;貒?guó),祝他一路順風(fēng)?!敬鸢浮縇adies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ),例如Ladies and Gentlemen,first of all,thank you for doing,give me a chance,be from,three years ago,get along with,be strict with,try his best to do,leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。17.(四川中考模擬)(題文) 書(shū)面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上,出現(xiàn)了一種專門(mén)照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人,它的主要功能有:1. 定時(shí)做飯、洗衣服; 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動(dòng);3. 處理緊急情況(如:撥打120)假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者,請(qǐng)你介紹這個(gè)產(chǎn)品,并談?wù)勀愕奈磥?lái)設(shè)想。要求:1. 意思連貫,語(yǔ)句通順;2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右;短文的開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)) 3. 參考詞匯: at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ),例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。18.(江蘇中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)每年的4月23日是世界讀書(shū)日,這個(gè)紀(jì)念日的意義在于推動(dòng)更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開(kāi)展“讀好書(shū),促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題,向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書(shū)的意義 1. 獲取知識(shí),開(kāi)闊視野 2. 使人愉悅,益于學(xué)習(xí) 3. ……(自由發(fā)揮)現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多,無(wú)良好讀書(shū)習(xí)慣 2. 不知道讀什么書(shū),不會(huì)選擇倡議 ……(至少兩點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________