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, 可適當發(fā)揮;2. 語句涌順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實信息;Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE39。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要描述爸爸最近給“我”買的音樂機器人?!驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文。內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個音樂機器人,其次表達為什么“我”要介紹這個機器人,也就是對它的喜愛。在寫作時,首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。8.(北京初三)題目1: 假如你是李華,你們班打算去“希望之家(Hope House)”孤兒院做志愿服務,你打算邀請你們學校的留學生Peter參加這次活動。請你用英語給他寫一封電子郵件,告訴他集合的時間和地點,你們將在孤兒院做什么,以及他可以做什么準備。提示詞語:gate,play,tell stories,gift提示問題:.When and where will you meet?.What will you do there?.What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity 【答案】例文How is it going?I am writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity at the Hope House. We will meet at the school gate at eight this Sunday morning. We will play games with the children and tell them some interesting stories.We will also give them some gifts. Would you like to tell the children something about your hometown? You can prepare some photos and videos to show.I am sure we will have an unforgettable time at the Hope House.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇邀請信,注意邀請信的格式,開頭問候,中間部分說正事,最后詢問他的回答。本材料給的提示比較多,學生可以按照提示,進行問題的回答即可。注意把相關內(nèi)容用連接詞連接起來,使文章通順?!驹斀狻课恼聻檠埿牛_頭問候,點明寫信內(nèi)容,寫信是為了邀請你和我們一起參加希望之家的志愿活動。我們將會在周日8點在校門口集合,主要活動有和孩子們玩耍,講故事,贈送禮物等。同時,建議對方做一些事情,可以向孩子們展示一下你的家鄉(xiāng)。希望你能和我們一起參加。【點睛】本書面表達:這篇文章語言規(guī)范,敘事清楚,時態(tài)運用正確,敘述清楚,語句通順,意思連貫,文章具有條理性,思維縝密。(1)學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。(2)列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。(3)切忌堆砌詞語、句子,注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達的順序。(4)注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。(5)注意檢查:單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。9.(江蘇中考模擬) 近年來,隨著智能手機的普及,越來越多的學生開始使用手機來完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學生們是否喜歡用app學習的討論,為此,英文報Teens 將在下期開設專欄討論這一話題,你采訪了一些同學,寫了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報道。內(nèi)容如下:支持者反對者學生們可以經(jīng)常利用手機操練說英語。自從使用手機以來,視力變差。一個理由……(12句)一個理由……(12句)你喜歡在用app學習嗎?給出你的理由……(23句),要求語句通順,意思連貫;;,短文開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù);,寫在試卷其他部位無效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干,這是屬于看法類的作文,那么在寫這類作文時,首先要分別寫出支持和反對兩方面的看法及原因,最后要說明自己的觀點看法來進行總結。亮點詞匯短語:practice doing ;learn by oneself自學;lead to導致;it is adj. for us to do sth對某人來說,做某事是怎樣的;in a proper way以適當?shù)姆绞?。亮點句型:There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ,這使我們更容易自己學習。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他們使用手機以來,他們的視力變得更差了。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。10.(長沙市開福區(qū)青竹湖湘一外國語學校中考模擬)書面表達健康的生活習慣是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習慣應該是怎樣的呢?請根據(jù)以下的信息提示,寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容:健康飲食;早睡早起,不熬夜;參加運動,強身健體。要求:必須包括所有要點,可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;80詞左右;文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學校名和地名。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Healthy habitI think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文,闡述你認為健康的生活習慣是什么樣的。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務,語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及l(fā)ast but not le