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a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)題干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作,人稱用第三人稱復數(shù)和第一人稱。內(nèi)容包括:學生近視原因:(not enough)、做作業(yè)、用電腦等(for a long time)防止近視的方法:,多進行體育活動(eye exercises)(have the good habit of)個人觀點:如:我認為,我們應該了解保護眼睛的重要性,盡最大努力保護我們的眼睛。(I think ???;try one39。s best to do sth.)。常用的重點句型和短語有:sb. spend some time doing sth.,in order to do sth.,try to do sth.,the importance of…等。9.(安徽中考模擬)假如你是李華,你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩,而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫,請你根據(jù)以下提示,用英文給他寫一封郵件,告訴他防暑降溫的方法?!?清淡飲食; ● 合理休息; ● 適當運動; ● ……注意: ;,可適當發(fā)揮;、學校名和地名;,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關于防暑的建議,所以寫作時,比較多地用到表示建議的句型,比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時要條理清晰,可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對文章檢查復合,避免單詞拼寫及語法錯誤。本篇文章首先第一段對別人的到來表示歡迎,接著對合肥的天氣進行總的描述,并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點建議,其中用到建議的句型,例如you should,you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,層次分明,詞語及句型使用正確,很不錯的一篇文章。10.(安徽省蚌埠龍湖中學中考模擬)當前,我市各學校正在開展“好書伴我成長”活動。請你根據(jù)活動主題并結(jié)合表格信息,以“Growing up with Good books”為題,用英語寫一篇約80個單詞的倡議書,向全校同學發(fā)出倡議。讀書的益處獲取知識、開闊視野、使人快樂 存在的現(xiàn)象聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占用了大部分業(yè)余時間發(fā)出倡議多讀書,讀經(jīng)典好書。讓讀書成為我們生活的一部分。要求:;,不計入總詞數(shù);。Growing up with Good booksMy dear friend,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Dear Friends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will bee.However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.Let’s start reading now. And let it bee a part of our life!Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如not only…but also,the more …the more,spend much time in doing,listen to music,watch TV,go online,play games,much of,like to do,so that,a part of等。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the ,既豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。11.(山東中考模擬) 書面表達 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京,請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息,介紹一下他的情況。(80詞左右)時間來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了,在北京工作。旅游曾經(jīng)去過長城,故宮等名勝。喜好過去喜歡看科幻小說,現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣,已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。工作情況早晨8點起床,乘坐地鐵去上班,空余時間練習漢語。夢想去很多不同的地方,了解中國文化,品嘗中國美食。I have a pen friend named Tom. 【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices