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play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。8.(廣西中考模擬)近幾年來(lái),一些學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)了一些興趣班(interest classes)或特色課(special classes), 諸如烹飪課、手工制作課以及傳統(tǒng)戲曲課等。你校校園網(wǎng)就你們學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)此類課程的必要性廣泛征求同學(xué)們的意見(jiàn)。以下是你們班同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)和理由。請(qǐng)就此并結(jié)合你自己的想法用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,發(fā)表在校園網(wǎng)的英語(yǔ)論壇上。觀點(diǎn)理由一些學(xué)生有必要1. 培養(yǎng)興趣, 并獲得更多的知識(shí);2. 提高生活技能另一些學(xué)生沒(méi)有必要1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間,對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)沒(méi)有幫助; 2. 給學(xué)生帶來(lái)很多壓力你……提示語(yǔ):develop one’s interests。 get more knowledge。 improve one’s life skills。 a wasteof time。 cause a lot of stress要求:1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格中的信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名;3. 詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,并且已給出了內(nèi)容提示,所以我們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)要圍繞所給內(nèi)容提示展開(kāi)。 根據(jù)作文要求,可以確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)通常會(huì)用到例如:I think, in one’s opinion 等引出觀點(diǎn)的詞語(yǔ)。另外,可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出觀點(diǎn),使文章更有條理,次序?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。首先內(nèi)容完整,第一段擺出事實(shí),第二段說(shuō)明別人的的觀點(diǎn),最后說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn),在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)有條理有次序。 短文中使用了一些很好的詞及短語(yǔ),例如such as,and so on,However等使句子更有連貫性,及好的句型表達(dá),例如:Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。9.(湖北初三) 童年是人生最美好的時(shí)光。小時(shí)候你一定接收了許多心愛(ài)的禮物,你最喜歡的禮物是什么?你擁有它多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了?它是誰(shuí)送給你的?它有什么特別的意思?它給你帶來(lái)了怎樣的回憶?請(qǐng)你以“My favorite gift”為題寫一篇80至100詞的英語(yǔ)短文。要求:行文連貫、條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、書寫規(guī)范;依據(jù)提示可適度發(fā)揮,文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。My favorite giftMy favorite gift from childhood is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My favorite giftMy favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. I like it very much because it is so cute. It39。s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don39。t want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because I39。m getting older!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的心愛(ài)禮物。主要從:你最喜歡的禮物是什么?你擁有它多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了?它是誰(shuí)送給你的?它有什么特別的意思?它給你帶來(lái)了怎樣的回憶?這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去在時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí),避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ),盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】It39。s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. 這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)很特別,因?yàn)槲規(guī)缀趺刻於荚谕?,直到十歲。句子because I used to play with it almost every day是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。【高分句型二】I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. 我記得當(dāng)我六歲的時(shí)候,沒(méi)有它我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)去睡覺(jué)。句子when I was six years old是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。10.(寧夏銀川二中中考模擬)假設(shè)你是李華。上周末你和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游,大家玩的很開(kāi)心。請(qǐng)你通過(guò)將此活動(dòng)過(guò)程告知你的好友Tom,并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要點(diǎn)如下:The trip to the Green FarmWhen4月22日早上8:00出發(fā)。下午5:00返回。Where學(xué)校大門口集合。綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)效游。How乘坐校車。What野炊、摘西紅柿,放風(fēng)箏等(至少提及三項(xiàng)活動(dòng))?!璖afety tips不要到河里游泳;不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)……:參考詞匯:get close to the nature(親近大自然)寫作要求:詞數(shù)60-80;(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或人名;所給的要點(diǎn)必須都用上;緊扣主題,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Dear Tom,How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear TomHow’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd came back at 5:00 in the met at the school went there by school bus . We had a piic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything had a chance to get close to the had a good trip.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表,要求介紹自己上周末和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游,大家玩的很開(kāi)心。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫。11.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達(dá)假如你是在蘇州學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)交流學(xué)生Max,你的英國(guó)同學(xué)Simon給你寫了一封電子郵件,想了解你在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件內(nèi)容,根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實(shí)際情況用英語(yǔ)給Simon回復(fù)一封電子郵件。To: maxbritain@From: simonbritain@Subject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes like?Is there anything interesting