【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 any students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵(lì)）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，交代寫(xiě)作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語(yǔ)老師的原因老師是一個(gè)認(rèn)真工作的人。老師對(duì)我嚴(yán)格要求。在我考試失利時(shí)鼓勵(lì)我。第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題，對(duì)老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因?yàn)槟愕恼n非常生動(dòng)有趣，對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)學(xué)好英語(yǔ)很簡(jiǎn)單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事…結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當(dāng)我考試失敗的時(shí)候，你鼓勵(lì)我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語(yǔ)encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類(lèi)作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Johnson打算暑假來(lái)合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法。● 清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫(xiě)作時(shí)，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時(shí)要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫(xiě)完后記得對(duì)文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫(xiě)及語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。本篇文章首先第一段對(duì)別人的到來(lái)表示歡迎，接著對(duì)合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點(diǎn)建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語(yǔ)及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。10．（浙江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)A small thing提示：請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目“A small thing”寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，記敘一件你經(jīng)歷過(guò)的小事。要求：，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)100左右；2. 文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名，校名，否則以零分計(jì)。 【答案】A small thingIt was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father. This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 【解析】【詳解】本文要記述自己經(jīng)歷過(guò)的一件小事, 在時(shí)態(tài)上用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。本篇文章,首先開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題,指出事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間及所經(jīng)歷的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a ，詞語(yǔ)at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章渾然一體。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對(duì)這件小事進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，更使文章在思想上得到了升華。文章時(shí)態(tài)使用正確，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。【點(diǎn)睛】認(rèn)真審題，看清題目要求，在描述事件時(shí)，要注意清晰表達(dá)事情發(fā)生的開(kāi)端，內(nèi)容及結(jié)尾。必要時(shí)要適當(dāng)使用連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，文章最后注意對(duì)整個(gè)故事進(jìn)行總結(jié)，最好能夠從故事中得出自己的感悟，在敘述故事的同時(shí)使文章具有思想性。寫(xiě)完文章后注意檢查有誤單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法使用錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)到要求。11．（山東中考模擬）寫(xiě)作現(xiàn)在，戴眼鏡的學(xué)生越來(lái)越多，為此，國(guó)家把每年 6 月 6 日定為愛(ài)眼日。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的體會(huì)，就如何愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)欄目寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：1．吃有益于眼睛的食物，如胡蘿卜、雞蛋等；2．多做眼保健操，長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用眼后可看看遠(yuǎn)方；3．養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣，如：不躺著玩手機(jī)或看書(shū)等。 要求：1．根據(jù)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；3．詞數(shù)90左右。（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it39。s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good habit. Don39。t read books or use a cell phone in bed.In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，寫(xiě)作前要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。寫(xiě)作的主題就是如何愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛。我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。用到的詞組或短語(yǔ)有：try one’s best to do盡力做某事，be good for對(duì)……有益，such as例如, from time to time不時(shí)地，It’s + adj. to do ；make sure to do ； keep healthy保持健康。12．（濟(jì)寧市第八中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你們學(xué)校正在開(kāi)展研究性學(xué)習(xí)（exploring learning strategies），請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文，讓更多的學(xué)生了解你校開(kāi)展研究性學(xué)習(xí)的一些情況。注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格提示的所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。過(guò)去現(xiàn)在課堂老師講解知識(shí)點(diǎn)，學(xué)生聽(tīng)講，記筆記，沒(méi)有足夠的時(shí)間獨(dú)立思考問(wèn)題。老師提出問(wèn)題，學(xué)生相互討論，并學(xué)會(huì)與他人合作,從而找出解決問(wèn)題的方法。課后做大量的作業(yè)。豐富多彩的課外活動(dòng)，如：讀自己喜歡的書(shū)，去圖書(shū)館或上網(wǎng)查資料等。個(gè)人感受……Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. ________________________________________【答案】Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think about problems by ourselves /indep