【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 any students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三個部分第一部分：開篇點題，交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語老師的原因老師是一個認真工作的人。老師對我嚴格要求。在我考試失利時鼓勵我。第三部分：再次點題，對老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因為你的課非常生動有趣，對我們來說學(xué)好英語很簡單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對某人來說做某事…結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當我考試失敗的時候，你鼓勵我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法。● 清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當運動； ● ……注意: ；，可適當發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫作時，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫及語法錯誤。本篇文章首先第一段對別人的到來表示歡迎，接著對合肥的天氣進行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語及句型使用正確，很不錯的一篇文章。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達A small thing提示：請根據(jù)所給題目“A small thing”寫一篇英語短文，記敘一件你經(jīng)歷過的小事。要求：，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)100左右；2. 文中不得使用你的真實姓名，校名，否則以零分計。 【答案】A small thingIt was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father. This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 【解析】【詳解】本文要記述自己經(jīng)歷過的一件小事, 在時態(tài)上用一般過去時。本篇文章,首先開篇點題,指出事情發(fā)生的時間及所經(jīng)歷的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a ，詞語at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章渾然一體。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對這件小事進行了總結(jié)，更使文章在思想上得到了升華。文章時態(tài)使用正確，表達準確，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不錯的文章?！军c睛】認真審題，看清題目要求，在描述事件時，要注意清晰表達事情發(fā)生的開端，內(nèi)容及結(jié)尾。必要時要適當使用連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，文章最后注意對整個故事進行總結(jié)，最好能夠從故事中得出自己的感悟，在敘述故事的同時使文章具有思想性。寫完文章后注意檢查有誤單詞拼寫錯誤，語法使用錯誤，字數(shù)是否達到要求。11．（山東中考模擬）寫作現(xiàn)在，戴眼鏡的學(xué)生越來越多，為此，國家把每年 6 月 6 日定為愛眼日。請你結(jié)合自己的體會，就如何愛護眼睛，給校報英語欄目寫一篇短文。提示：1．吃有益于眼睛的食物，如胡蘿卜、雞蛋等；2．多做眼保健操，長時間用眼后可看看遠方；3．養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習慣，如：不躺著玩手機或看書等。 要求：1．根據(jù)內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；3．詞數(shù)90左右。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)） Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it39。s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good habit. Don39。t read books or use a cell phone in bed.In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，寫作前要認真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。寫作的主題就是如何愛護眼睛。我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。用到的詞組或短語有：try one’s best to do盡力做某事，be good for對……有益，such as例如, from time to time不時地，It’s + adj. to do ；make sure to do ； keep healthy保持健康。12．（濟寧市第八中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達假如你們學(xué)校正在開展研究性學(xué)習（exploring learning strategies），請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一篇短文，讓更多的學(xué)生了解你校開展研究性學(xué)習的一些情況。注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格提示的所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。過去現(xiàn)在課堂老師講解知識點，學(xué)生聽講，記筆記，沒有足夠的時間獨立思考問題。老師提出問題，學(xué)生相互討論，并學(xué)會與他人合作,從而找出解決問題的方法。課后做大量的作業(yè)。豐富多彩的課外活動，如：讀自己喜歡的書，去圖書館或上網(wǎng)查資料等。個人感受……Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. ________________________________________【答案】Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think about problems by ourselves /indep