【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 e my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我最大的個(gè)人變化是喜歡上讀書，接下來(lái)介紹我小時(shí)候不喜歡讀書，最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。5．書面表達(dá)每年的4月23日是世界讀書日，這個(gè)紀(jì)念日的意義在于推動(dòng)更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開展“讀好書，促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書的意義 1. 獲取知識(shí)，開闊視野 2. 使人愉悅，益于學(xué)習(xí) 3. ……（自由發(fā)揮）現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多，無(wú)良好讀書習(xí)慣 2. 不知道讀什么書，不會(huì)選擇倡議 ……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life． First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful． However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet． In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future． Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。同時(shí)First of all，/ Second，/ Third等時(shí)間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運(yùn)用，既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明，還豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6． “美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來(lái)，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文號(hào)召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來(lái)。要求：，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same