【正文】 nd work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友Li Ming回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。4．每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長，作為初中生的你，你感覺自已比起小時候有了哪些變化?請寫一篇文章描述一下你認為最明顯的變化。5．書面表達每年的4月23日是世界讀書日，這個紀念日的意義在于推動更多人去閱讀。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進行“雙創(chuàng)”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動。（2）本周五的下午3點，大家將共同交流讀書的體會。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動，并且告訴外教同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。修改潤色。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。4至少80詞。寫作要點：1表達收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet． In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future． Let39。開頭介紹了我最大的個人變化是喜歡上讀書，接下來介紹我小時候不喜歡讀書，最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。開頭為你想要成為一名志愿