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idely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it.They think that some students can39。t control themselves and often play games. What39。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly,students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn),不可遺漏。需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯,寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等??梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句型?!军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型:I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way.我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。I think+賓語(yǔ)從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是…的。2.A解析:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論,寫出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn),所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱,敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法,不能是漢語(yǔ)式的句子,要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式,如:do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語(yǔ)從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子??键c(diǎn):材料作文。3.C解析:Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料類介紹型作文,所以我們必須要結(jié)合所給材料再適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ):one of...,...之一;green tea綠茶;be famous for...,因…而出名;keep healthy保持健康;be strict in sth對(duì)…嚴(yán)格;not only....but also...,不僅...而且...。亮點(diǎn)句型:It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對(duì)人們保持健康有好處。It is+adj.(for sb.) to do sth. (對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō))做某事是怎樣的。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國(guó)著名的茶葉,它不僅與龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關(guān),而且與龍井的生產(chǎn)工藝有關(guān)。Which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語(yǔ)從句。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產(chǎn)的勝地。Where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。4.D解析:Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文。【詳解】根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知,這是一篇書信類文章。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分:第一部分:交代寫信目的——朋友Jack熱愛中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。我將給你介紹《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)這首詩(shī)。第二部分:文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)這首詩(shī)。:孟郊:唐朝:母親為兒子做衣服:母愛的偉大第三部分:信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題,可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己,并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。5.D解析:Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)計(jì)劃?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。6.A解析:例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭,具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式,時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述具體怎么做時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):protect the environm