【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 h during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法?！?清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫作時(shí)，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時(shí)要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對(duì)文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫及語法錯(cuò)誤。本篇文章首先第一段對(duì)別人的到來表示歡迎，接著對(duì)合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點(diǎn)建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。10．（福建中考模擬）寬容是一種美德，人與人之間難免會(huì)有磕磕絆絆，面對(duì)矛盾，多一份包容和諒解，生活 就會(huì)多一縷陽光。請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括：你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒了對(duì)方，以及原諒對(duì)方之后的感受。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。 注意：不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。提示詞語：forgive原諒提示問題：What happened between you and him/her?Why did you decide to forgive him/her?How did you feel after forgiving him/her?I still remember what happened between ...【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o39。clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn39。t show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing puter games at home at that time.I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括: 你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒了對(duì)方，以及原諒對(duì)方之后的感受。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過去時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，認(rèn)真閱讀提示問題（ happened between you and him/her? did you decide to forgive him/her? did you feel after forgiving him/her? still remember what happened between ...），提示問題就是本文的提示要點(diǎn)，確定要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示問題和提示詞。字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在80詞左右。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我還記得我朋友邁克和我之間發(fā)生的事。兩個(gè)月前，邁克邀請(qǐng)我七點(diǎn)鐘去聽音樂會(huì)。我準(zhǔn)時(shí)到達(dá)那里。我等了很長時(shí)間，但邁克最終沒有出現(xiàn)。我打電話問他發(fā)生了什么事。他把音樂會(huì)的一切都忘了。那時(shí)他在家里玩電腦游戲。我生邁克的氣是因?yàn)樗麄α宋业母星?。邁克也意識(shí)到了他的錯(cuò)誤。他給我打了好幾次電話，向我道歉。他甚至送我一件禮物讓我開心。最后我原諒了他。原諒他之后，我感到輕松愉快?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 要求：、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整；、校名和地名等信息；，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。12．（山東中考模擬）環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項(xiàng)：，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,詞數(shù)不少于80。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they