【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。2．One possible version：At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make ou解析：One possible version：At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文，論點(diǎn)是：在我們自己的事情上，我們應(yīng)該自己做決定，還是由家長來做決定。關(guān)于這個(gè)話題每個(gè)人都會(huì)有自己的看法，題目要求我們?nèi)芜x一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)來講述，并結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，給出2到3個(gè)理由。寫作之前，我們應(yīng)先從正方和反方中選擇一個(gè)，作為自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的理由。這是一篇話題作文，題目中并沒有給我們規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，結(jié)合自己的日常生活來組織語言，豐富文章的內(nèi)容。寫作時(shí)還應(yīng)注意的是語言的表達(dá)，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型，多用簡單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)復(fù)合句或并列句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。高級(jí)句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次，在語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意表達(dá)連貫、流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點(diǎn)，第一句話先點(diǎn)明自己的觀點(diǎn)是什么，接下來圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述，并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點(diǎn)的理由，充分、合理，有說服力。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點(diǎn)，并進(jìn)行了總結(jié)。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主，謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。句式表達(dá)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，簡單句為主，也使用了較多的復(fù)合句和高級(jí)句型，如狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動(dòng)詞等。有些句子較長，是由于使用高級(jí)句型所致，一味使用較長的句子也會(huì)導(dǎo)致文章的冗長，讓讀者感覺比較累，因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型和短語有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal 。3．My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the cam解析：My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。4．At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how解析：At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的方式。寫作中學(xué)生需要緊密貼合題干中已經(jīng)給出的要點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息，不單獨(dú)和網(wǎng)友見面，使用文明語言，等等。學(xué)生可以在這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)上整理自己的語言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實(shí)用的祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結(jié)尾提出了倡議，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰。5．It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our解析：It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】