【正文】 hout them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．　Let39。s be active readers and enjoy reading．【解析】這是一篇材料作文，行文之前，把表格里的要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容通讀一遍，做出框架，開(kāi)始寫(xiě)作時(shí)，把表格里所列內(nèi)容全部表述到文章中，并且自己適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，注意人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)，詞形的變化。適當(dāng)增加銜接詞，使文章更出彩。如對(duì)長(zhǎng)句不好把握，就盡量使用短句。11．Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since解析：Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》投稿，談一談自己對(duì)共享單車(chē)的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車(chē)的優(yōu)勢(shì)；存在的問(wèn)題以及你自己對(duì)這件事情的看法。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語(yǔ)言，并表達(dá)出來(lái)，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段或前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容合到一段。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話(huà)題共享單車(chē)；第二段講述了共享單車(chē)的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一些問(wèn)題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以第三人稱(chēng)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、表達(dá)流暢。12．How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about mysel解析：How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫(xiě)作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。13．Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr.解析：Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。14．At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.解析：At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven39。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開(kāi)討論。具體需要圍繞考試作弊的原因展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，原因已經(jīng)給出來(lái)了，有以下幾點(diǎn)： 。寫(xiě)完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議，具體內(nèi)容也已給出：；，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮；。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容上難度不大，需要把更多精力放在語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和文章的連貫性上面。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象，用到了一些較好的短語(yǔ)，如picked up a bad habit（養(yǎng)成了一個(gè)壞習(xí)慣）。第二段對(duì)原因進(jìn)行了闡述，借助了first，second，third等詞使得原因的陳述連貫起來(lái)。一些短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪費(fèi)時(shí)間在玩游戲上），prepare for the exams（準(zhǔn)備考試）。最后一段闡明了自己的看法（In my opinion），句式上面有創(chuàng)新，用到了一處倒裝句（only in this way can we improve our study and make progress），強(qiáng)調(diào)了不能作弊，只有以誠(chéng)實(shí)和勤奮的方式我們才能進(jìn)步?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)文章寫(xiě)作較為流暢，有許多亮點(diǎn)。15