【正文】 好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。7．Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university people th解析：Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university people think teenagers should learn from stars and find their strengths and then they are strict with they are sad,it is fun to think ,they forget the pressure of learning.However, others think it is a waste of time and energy to chase stars. And it also affects their studies. They can’t face the reality and always dreams of being a famous star. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we bee useful persons in the future.【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：根據(jù)所給提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步進(jìn)行，首先分別列舉正反雙方的觀點(diǎn)，然后擺出自己的看法，并總結(jié)作為青少年的我們應(yīng)該怎么做。列舉觀點(diǎn)時(shí)要思路清晰，具有條理性。本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。However, others think…用however轉(zhuǎn)折之后接著列出不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。然后In my opinion….巧妙運(yùn)用過渡語，列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。 We should….針對我們青少年應(yīng)該怎么做，給出自己的建議。總結(jié)流暢自然，渾然天成。8．My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It c解析：My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will do us good!Let’s start reading now!【解析】本文是一篇倡議書。要求根據(jù)青少年讀書少的現(xiàn)象，根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息，用英語寫一份向全校同學(xué)提出的倡議書。內(nèi)容包括讀書的意義、大部分學(xué)生目前的狀況、最后發(fā)出倡議。本文時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱。本文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，考生需要把所提示的內(nèi)容逐條翻譯成英文，要涵蓋提示內(nèi)容的所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。寫作中可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，注意語句要通順，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系；同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一，這樣會使文章更出色。9．We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member o解析：We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學(xué)校英文報(bào)刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來為?？陡澹勔徽勅绾蝿?chuàng)建一個(gè)和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個(gè)提綱，具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實(shí)完成。因此首先我們要仔細(xì)思考這個(gè)問題，結(jié)合自己的真實(shí)生活，想一想平時(shí)是怎么做的，應(yīng)該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。另外一個(gè)難點(diǎn)是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達(dá)出來，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時(shí)，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應(yīng)從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時(shí)態(tài)來敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個(gè)句子應(yīng)以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后再變化成較高級、復(fù)雜是句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語動(dòng)詞形式等。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實(shí)。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。10．Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the readin解析：Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They don’t know what to read. Sometimes there is too much homework to do, so they don’t have time to read. What’s worse, they would rather spend their free time on puter games. I love reading and I’m in the school Reading Club. I got a lot of knowledge through reading. I have read over ten books since last September. I think reading helps open up a whole new world to us. I’m sure reading will be popular as time goes on!Come on, Everyone! Let’s start reading now!【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你校正在開展“讀好書，促成長”活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題，用英語寫一份倡議書，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議，號召大家參與此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。 the reading habit閱讀習(xí)慣；spend their free time on puter games把空閑時(shí)間花在電腦游戲上；11．Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can als解析：Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can also help us open our minds. So as middle school students, we should read more. In my opinion, textbooks, newspapers and magazines are all good reading materials. As for me, I plan to read one book every month. Whenever I have free time, I’ll read. As the saying goes, reading makes a full man. Let’s start reading now.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要按照要求以“閱讀”為主題寫作，要寫出讀書的好處、中學(xué)生可以讀的書、你的讀書計(jì)劃。按照要求逐條描述即可，但要注意增添相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)使得文章連貫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：總起要對reading做一個(gè)概括，用到了“plays an important role”（扮演重要的角色）這一搭配，關(guān)于讀書的好處提到了：open our minds（開闊思維），relax（放松）。關(guān)于可以讀的書，介紹了幾種文本（textbooks, newspapers and magazine），關(guān)于介紹讀書計(jì)劃，描述了自己讀書的頻率，最后，有引用諺語，也是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。12．Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our li解析：Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard lea