【正文】 have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點建議。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。11．Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Intern解析：Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”為話題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的兩種不同的觀點。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語從句、讓步狀語從句、動名詞作主語等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。12．Online shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online sho解析：Online shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a puter and mouse. Third, you can pare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的利與弊。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。13．One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering解析：One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語將這些內(nèi)容完整地敘述出來，并簡單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。因此寫作前，要仔細看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。通過分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。寫作時要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。還需注意的是英語表達和漢語的習(xí)慣不同，不能逐詞去翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用簡單句的基本句型，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。在文章中點綴幾個并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達的信息，表述準確。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護樹木。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，條理清晰。文章最后的兩句話也點明了文章的主題。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞用了過去式，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動詞過去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。語法規(guī)范、準確。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。14．Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. It has lot解析：Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. It is convenient and you can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. There are so many goods online that it is easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. Besides, the price is much lower.However, “ Every coin has two sides.” So does Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, sometimes it’s not easy to give them back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.In my opinion, Internet shopping is easy and fast but we should be more careful.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點。要求用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。convenient 方便的；in one’s opinion按某人的觀點15．Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional fe解析：Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I ‘m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back onhis