【正文】 angerous to swim alone.In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以How can we protect ourselves為題，談一談青少年在日常生活中應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)自己。這是一篇話題作文，文章中只給出了寫作的題目，而未給出具體的內(nèi)容，因此首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)結(jié)合自己的日常生活，發(fā)揮想象力，先列出文章具體內(nèi)容的提綱，然后根據(jù)題綱來組織語言，最后成文。這樣的題目是有點(diǎn)難度的，但也一定程度上放開了學(xué)生的思維，學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)自己所想來寫作，而不用受到內(nèi)容的限制。寫之前，要注意確定文章應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇作文應(yīng)以第一人稱we為主，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來敘述。注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，以主謂賓和主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，寫出正確的句子，然后為提升文章檔次，使用幾個(gè)較復(fù)雜的句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)等等。還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用一些短語、副詞等，使整篇文章意思連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，并且內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，表達(dá)清楚、明了。作者從三個(gè)方面講述了自己的看法，這幾個(gè)方面都非常符合實(shí)際，所提建議很合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、第一人稱為主，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves ；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中非謂語動(dòng)詞的使用。文章各部分之間使用了較好的連接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，這些詞匯和短語的使用讓文章具有連貫性。10．As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festi解析：As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對(duì)者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對(duì)玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。11．It’s important to be polite to other people, whether we are at home or abroad. If other people are解析：It’s important to be polite to other people, whether we are at home or abroad. If other people are friendly and polite to us, we will feel happy. So other people will want us to be friendly and polite, too. On a plane, if a flight attendant gives us good service, we should express our thanks to her or him. If she or he is busy, we should wait for our turn to be served. If there is a queue waiting at the ticket office, we should join the queue instead of going to the front of it. In public places, we should obey the rules and not make other people feel upset. Anyway, if you want to receive smile, you should smile first. So always be polite, and our world will be full of sunshine.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文及命題作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。12．Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junio解析：Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us。 Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework.Dear friends, please actively take part in afteractivities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning.【解析】這篇作文要求寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動(dòng)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意如果主語是第三人稱單數(shù)的時(shí)候，謂語動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。13．Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we h解析：Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we had a discussion about twochild students think they don’t want to have a brother or a sister. Because they don’t want to share parents’ love with , parents can be tired because of two children. However,others think they want to have a brother or a sister. Because they are eager for a person to play can share their happiness and sorrow.17% of students think they can’t mind having a brother or a should be decided by their parents.I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I can share everything with him or her.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇以“Do you want t