【正文】 allthemed schools by 2解析：Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿＝Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m very excited to hear that……；It is liked by……；it helps……，I’m……，My dream is……，I hope…....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了關(guān)于足球的常識，接下來介紹踢足球的好處以及我的偶像，最后介紹我的夢想。此處have a very long history, all over the world, take place, take part in, what’s more, be good for, have a gift for等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how解析：At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的方式。寫作中學(xué)生需要緊密貼合題干中已經(jīng)給出的要點：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實的個人信息，不單獨和網(wǎng)友見面，使用文明語言，等等。學(xué)生可以在這個基礎(chǔ)上整理自己的語言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實用的祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當(dāng)運用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結(jié)尾提出了倡議，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰。10．I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical G解析：I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。本題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，邀請對方并給出建議，需使用表達(dá)邀請和用于提建議的相關(guān)短語和句式，注意長短搭配，并在行文中增加細(xì)節(jié)和過渡，使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析提示要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累和寫作練習(xí)以外，還應(yīng)該適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a piic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，e back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the going to結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點。11．I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people解析：I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，講述一件我點贊的事情，我從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要點贊的人，接下來介紹他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。12．Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the readin解析：Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They don’t know what to read. Sometimes there is too much homework to do, so they don’t have time to read. What’s worse, they would rather spend their free time on puter games. I love reading and I’m in the school Reading Club. I got a lot of knowledge through reading. I have read over ten books since last September. I think reading helps open up a whole new world to us. I’m sure reading will be popular as time goes on!Come on, Everyone! Let’s start reading now!【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你校正在開展“讀好書，促成長”活動，請你根據(jù)這項活動的主題，用英語寫一份倡議書，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議，號召大家參與此項活動。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。 the reading habit閱讀習(xí)慣；spend their free time on puter games把空閑時間花在電腦游戲上；13．We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in al解析：We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard. I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.