【正文】 how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文，論點是：在我們自己的事情上，我們應(yīng)該自己做決定，還是由家長來做決定。關(guān)于這個話題每個人都會有自己的看法，題目要求我們?nèi)芜x一個觀點來講述，并結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，給出2到3個理由。寫作之前，我們應(yīng)先從正方和反方中選擇一個，作為自己的觀點，然后圍繞這一觀點闡述自己的理由。這是一篇話題作文，題目中并沒有給我們規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，結(jié)合自己的日常生活來組織語言，豐富文章的內(nèi)容。寫作時還應(yīng)注意的是語言的表達，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型，多用簡單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)，點綴幾個復(fù)合句或并列句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。高級句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次，在語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意表達連貫、流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點，第一句話先點明自己的觀點是什么，接下來圍繞這一觀點進行闡述，并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點的理由，充分、合理，有說服力。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點，并進行了總結(jié)。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞形式準確，語法規(guī)范。句式表達符合英語的表達習慣，簡單句為主，也使用了較多的復(fù)合句和高級句型，如狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等。有些句子較長，是由于使用高級句型所致，一味使用較長的句子也會導(dǎo)致文章的冗長，讓讀者感覺比較累，因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型和短語有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal 。10．Dear Mr. Zhang,We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to shar解析：Dear Mr. Zhang,We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.70 percent of the students agree with you. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in sports or arts. So they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.However, 30 percent of the students don’t agree. They think some slower students always talk in class instead of listening to the teachers carefully. On the other hand, slower students often ask questions and they may influence others.I think I’d like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other. We can make progress together. YoursLi Ping【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你班班主任在安排座位時，讓成績好的學生和成績差的學生同桌，這在學生中引起了反響，班會課上大家就此進行了討論?，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)表格把討論結(jié)果向班主任寫一封信反映一下，并說出自己的觀點。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。agree with sb同意某人；be good at擅長； learn from each other互相學習11．Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class解析：Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs inmy spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oralEnglish, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which theyare interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce somewestern culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautifulEnglish music and poems. I’d be very happy if I bee a host.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達是圍繞一篇演講稿展開，貼近學校生活，學生有話可寫。但是在寫作上一定要注意審題，不要跑題或者偏題。要按要點和給出的提示問題來完成寫作任務(wù)，但不能生硬的寫幾個句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒有任何的連接詞。在詞匯的運用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型與詞匯外，注意句型的變化，連詞的使用使詞義連貫流暢，同時也使得文章有層次感，有條理性。注意高級句型的運用提升文章的檔次。寫作亮點：文章開頭點明主題，表明目的，然后對自己進行簡要的個人介紹。句型變化多，有定語從句的使用，數(shù)量恰當，句式豐富，短語多樣。關(guān)于討論自己的競選后的工作計劃，使用了正確的時態(tài)進行表達（I am going to not only introduce some western culture…），有結(jié)尾，（I’m looking forward to your early reply.）體現(xiàn)了文章的完整性。12．Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 3解析：Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Our school will hold……，On the day we will……，We thank them for……，I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們學校舉行了一個感恩老師的活動，接下來介紹我們的活動內(nèi)容，最后表達我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。13．Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that yo解析：Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是針對英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達歡迎和你的擔憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個提綱要點，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達的要點和細節(jié)。本文的寫作要點：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；