【正文】 我的榜樣，最后我希望長(zhǎng)大后像他一樣。此處be friendly to, be patient with, try to do sth, teach sb sth, help sb do sth, be like, set a good example for sb, hope to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。8．Online shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online sho解析：Online shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a puter and mouse. Third, you can pare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的利與弊。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。9．My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the cam解析：My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。10．It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have chang解析：It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.In the past, I went to school in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket.However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書(shū)后的很大變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)，我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書(shū)后有很大變化，接下來(lái)介紹我過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化，最后作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。11．Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since解析：Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》投稿，談一談自己對(duì)共享單車(chē)的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車(chē)的優(yōu)勢(shì)；存在的問(wèn)題以及你自己對(duì)這件事情的看法。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語(yǔ)言，并表達(dá)出來(lái)，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱來(lái)敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段或前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容合到一段。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車(chē)；第二段講述了共享單車(chē)的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一些問(wèn)題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、表達(dá)流暢。12．Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the readin解析：Dear friends, Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They don’t know what to read. Sometimes there is too much homework to do, so they don’t have time to read. What’s worse, they would rather spend their free time on puter games. I love reading and I’m in the school Reading Club. I got a lot of knowledge through reading. I have read over ten books since last September. I think reading helps open up a whole new world to us. I’m sure reading will be popular as time goes on!Come on, Everyone! Let’s start reading now!【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你校正在開(kāi)展“讀好書(shū)，促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議，號(hào)召大家參與此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。 the reading habit閱讀習(xí)慣；spend their free time on