【正文】 e in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。11．How to Have Reading ActivitiesAs we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only ma解析：How to Have Reading ActivitiesAs we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves. I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.First, we can read in our school library. There are all kinds of books there. It39。s a good place to read. Second, we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class. Third, we can exchange books with one another. It helps develop our cooperation spirit. At last，it39。s necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.All in all, we can benefit from colorful reading activities.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，主要內(nèi)容是圍繞由于受到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的影響，青少年對(duì)閱讀漸漸失去興趣這一現(xiàn)象，就如何在學(xué)生中開(kāi)展閱讀活動(dòng)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)小短文。結(jié)合所給的材料可知時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)輔以第三人稱(chēng)。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，注意要理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。提示要點(diǎn)：。：①在圖書(shū)館閱讀。 ②在班級(jí)建立圖書(shū)角。③同學(xué)間互借。 ④計(jì)劃閱讀時(shí)間及閱讀量?！?12．Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this解析：Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館，接下來(lái)介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁矗詈笾赋鑫覀円诤螘r(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。13．It’s never too late to fulfill my promiseMolly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise解析：It’s never too late to fulfill my promiseMolly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise together. She said that she wanted to go to Hainan with me and see the beautiful scenery when we grow up. I happily agreed.Ten years had passed since I made that promise. However, I didn’t do anything about the promise because I was busy with my study. My mother also disagreed with me. “You should know study is the top priority （首要任務(wù)） for a student. You are just a teenage girl, there’s no way you can go there without an adult’s help.” I always felt upset when my mother said something like this.I talked to Molly about it. “My mother won’t allow me.” I sighed （嘆息）. “It’s a really long way. What should we do?” said Molly. “I don’t know.” I replied, “But we can make a plan by choosing a perfect time first.”“I’d like to set off when the summer holiday begins,” she said. “We can go there with both our parents. I want us to go there together. Just the way I have promised you.” I said.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，將“It’s never too late to ...”補(bǔ)充完整，并以此為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Molly and I used to……，She said that……，I didn’t do……，I talked to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想長(zhǎng)大了去海南看美麗的風(fēng)景，接下來(lái)介紹我一直想做這件事，但沒(méi)能實(shí)現(xiàn)的原因，最后介紹我下一步的計(jì)劃。此處used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。14．Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr.解析：Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。15．Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lot解析：Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：本文需要寫(xiě)一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來(lái)描述優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再用一段描述劣勢(shì)和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會(huì)條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。具體來(lái)說(shuō)，每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)在陳述的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。第二段開(kāi)始描述優(yōu)勢(shì)，這里用到了“無(wú)論什么時(shí)候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達(dá)“...是開(kāi)放的”也很準(zhǔn)確，用了“be open”。比較級(jí)的應(yīng)用也相對(duì)準(zhǔn)確，例如cheaper。連詞的使用也是亮點(diǎn)，besides意為“除此之外”。在談到劣勢(shì)的時(shí)候引用了俗語(yǔ)“Every coin has two sides.”，是個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。“What’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語(yǔ)言