【正文】 ditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this解析：Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時何地見面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁矗詈笾赋鑫覀円诤螘r何地見面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。13．Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lot解析：Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來描述優(yōu)點，再用一段描述劣勢和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。具體來說，每個觀點在陳述的時候要注意表達準確。寫作亮點：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。第二段開始描述優(yōu)勢，這里用到了“無論什么時候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達“...是開放的”也很準確，用了“be open”。比較級的應(yīng)用也相對準確，例如cheaper。連詞的使用也是亮點，besides意為“除此之外”。在談到劣勢的時候引用了俗語“Every coin has two sides.”，是個亮點?！癢hat’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語言的多樣性?？傮w來說要點均被提及，語言準確富有活力。14．Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共解析：Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于）queuing up （排隊） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what39。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語言表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。15．How to save timeWe have ever heard of “Time is money. Time is life”.Time is very important to eve解析：How to save timeWe have ever heard of “Time is money. Time is life”.Time is very important to everyone. But we can see people waste their time everywhere. They spend much time playing puter games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on. It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time. We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class. We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time. We should spend more time reading instead of playing games.If we can make good use of time we are sure to get more. To save time is to save life. Let’s save time from now on.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time.。spend doing sth； make a plan。；from now on。；make good use of 。But；so that ；If,等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。16．I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people解析：I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，講述一件我點贊的事情，我從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要點贊的人，接下來介紹他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。17．Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He s解析：Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed