【正文】 a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to municate is the mobile ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時，可把提示的內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子，最后把這些句子連在一起即可。11．Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s veryimportant for eve解析：Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s veryimportant for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in theEnglish exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, Iencouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.【解析】試題分析：本題要求談?wù)剬ι拼说目捶ǎ?jīng)友善待人的經(jīng)歷，以及你的感受。短文要覆蓋提示的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文中正確使用時態(tài)（過去時）來描述過去的經(jīng)歷以進(jìn)行表達(dá)，使用第一人稱形式進(jìn)行寫作。但也要注意在總結(jié)自己的感受，談?wù)撚^點(diǎn)的時候要使用一般現(xiàn)在時表明看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文開始就引入話題；提出了善待別人是傳統(tǒng)美德，借助動名詞做主語（Being kind to others is…），之后介紹了一段自己的經(jīng)歷，表意清晰，中心明確，動詞過去時使用正確。有幾個短語和結(jié)構(gòu)的使用堪稱亮點(diǎn)，如：so…that…。 give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，豐富的短語交錯使用，使得故事表達(dá)清晰具體，切合主題，主旨鮮明突出。12．I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of解析：I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。13．Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chines解析：Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學(xué)家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設(shè)美麗中國，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學(xué)家怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢，中國人正在努力做貢獻(xiàn)，接下來介紹農(nóng)民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學(xué)家如何做貢獻(xiàn)的，最后表示我們作為學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。14．Dear Mr. Zhang,We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to shar解析：Dear Mr. Zhang,We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.70 percent of the students agree with you. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in sports or arts. So they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.However, 30 percent of the students don’t agree. They think some slower students always talk in class instead of listening to the teachers carefully. On the other hand, slower students often ask questions and they may influence others.I think I’d like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other. We can make progress together. YoursLi Ping【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你班班主任在安排座位時，讓成績好的學(xué)生和成績差的學(xué)生同桌，這在學(xué)生中引起了反響，班會課上大家就此進(jìn)行了討論?，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)表格把討論結(jié)果向班主任寫一封信反映一下，并說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。agree with sb同意某人；be good at擅長； learn from each other互相學(xué)習(xí)15．Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。 Speaking解析：Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。 Speaking Online Test with you. I think it is necessary for us to take the listening and speaking test. In the test, you need to listen and choose the best answer and you will listen and answer the questions. Next, you’ll listen and take notes and then you will listen and retell the passage according to the notes. Finally, you’ll read a passage aloud. If you want to improve your listening and speaking, you should listen more and read aloud. At the same time, you’d better pay more attention to your pronunciation. What’s more, you can practice retelling. It is a good idea to retell the passage that you’ve just learnt. Practice makes perfect. Wish you success. Thank you for listening.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，為初一初二的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們做聽說機(jī)考的經(jīng)驗(yàn)介紹。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m glad that……，I think……，If you want to……，you’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我對英語聽說機(jī)考的認(rèn)識，接下來介紹你們在考試中需要做什么，最后給出一些建議。此處share sth with sb, need to do sth, take notes, want to do sth, at the same time,