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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20.(天津中考模擬)根據(jù)聯(lián)合國教科文組織的統(tǒng)計顯示,北歐國家國民每年讀書24本左右,美國人年均閱讀7本書,.韓國人11本書,日本、而中國國民人均讀書數(shù)量低于5本。你的閱讀量是多少?作為一名中學生,你應該怎么做?請根據(jù)下列表格中所給要點,寫一篇英語短文。要 點讀書好;,帶來快樂;好(h224。o)讀書;讀好書;5.—本好書改變?nèi)说囊簧R?,可適當發(fā)揮;,字跡工整,詞數(shù)不少于80;:,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:身心健康:mental and physical healthNowadays,reading is being more and more popular among_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s be activereaders and enjoy reading.【參考答案】***試卷處理標記,請不要刪除一、初中英語書面表達1.The happy lifeMy school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom解析:The happy lifeMy school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom with our lovely classmates. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful. We get on well with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. Though sometimes there is too much homework, with their help, we always finish it happily. During our free time, We play ball games and sing songs together. I wish to have a job I like and I will share my success with my parents. I also hope that I can do a lot of meaningful work for the society in the future. At present, I must study hard to make my dream e true. 【解析】英語作文寫出的句子要達意,完整,語法正確,合乎習慣,特別是句式,謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù),選用比較有把握的詞匯,用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài),注意提供的觀點、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文,要忠實于材料,不必擴展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯句。get on well with相處融洽;help each other and learn from each other互相幫助,互相學習;with one’s help在某人的幫助下;in the future. 在未來;e true.(夢想)成真2.We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member o解析:We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是:你們學校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文,你來為??陡澹勔徽勅绾蝿?chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文,題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱,具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考,發(fā)揮想象力來充實完成。因此首先我們要仔細思考這個問題,結(jié)合自己的真實生活,想一想平時是怎么做的,應該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個難點。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達出來,英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的,寫作時,不能逐詞去翻譯,而應從文章、句子的整體考慮,首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述;可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型,每個句子應以簡單句為基礎,如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu),然后再變化成較高級、復雜是句型,如復合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應注意語句之間的連接,使用恰當?shù)倪B詞或副詞,使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為,使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述,符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范,句式表達符合英語的習慣。文章中以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句和復合句,調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu),使用復雜句型、短文和較高級的句型,提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。3.Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term. Now I’ll introduce s解析:Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term. Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them.Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China,we arrange a pingpong game for the students.They can learn from each other. What’s more,they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food.All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner.In our culture,dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck.I think they will enjoy their time here. I’m looking forward to your ing.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國懷特學校的校長Green 先生寫一封信,介紹他們學校的學生來你校參觀時的活動安排以及理由。通過審題可知,這篇作文的主要內(nèi)容有以下幾個方面:首先介紹不少于兩個關(guān)于中國文化的活動,如打乒乓球、包餃子等;然后敘述安排這樣的活動的理由。根據(jù)表達要點充實寫作內(nèi)容,使文意完整。整篇作文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),根據(jù)表達的需要使用適當?shù)娜朔Q,注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時,應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同,不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。而應從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮,使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型。句式表達以簡單句為基礎,穿插復合句,如賓語從句、定語從句等,提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫,表達流暢。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文內(nèi)容完整,符合題目要求。短文主要分三段,第一段對懷特學校學生們的到來表示歡迎(題目給出),然后作者一句話引出了文章的主題,Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them.。第二段是文章的主體部分,這一段中介紹了學校的活動安排:打乒乓球和包餃子,并闡述了安排這些活動的理由。這一段占篇幅最大,里面使用了較豐富的句式,如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導原因狀語從句;All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動詞不定式作目的狀語;In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。最后一段作者用一句話表達了自己的期望。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理、層次清晰,語句表達準確,意思連貫。4.There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usual解析:There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usually es on August 15 of the lunar year. On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family.