【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗或感受。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。3．It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our解析：It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇書面表達的話題是“分享”。首先我們根據(jù)給出的圖表確定要寫的內(nèi)容的提綱，包括：分享什么？為什么分享？怎么分享？然后根據(jù)每個提綱給出的一些關(guān)鍵詞，列出寫作要點及每個要點可能用到的表達，拓展思維，寫出自己的看法。最后，我們還要注意“分享”的情感教育，讓我們學(xué)有所獲。文章時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱主要用第一人稱。在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。4．Dear Tom,I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech petition, s解析：Dear Tom,I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech petition, so I’m writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance.You did a good job in the Chinese speech petition. You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful. You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you. What’s more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents.As your best friend, I know you tried your best for the petition. You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better. I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up. I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如：try one’s best。 What’s more, feel proud of； in order to； give up ；keep on trying. ； It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等；so ；sothat等連詞的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。5．As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer t解析：As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點和缺點是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。6．In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.Firs解析：In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. should choose to live a lowcarbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫出中學(xué)生應(yīng)從表格中的幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中had better，by bike, on foot，instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ，take care of, devote … to …, learn from 等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中使用了固定句型It’s +形容詞+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定語從句、時間狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。7．I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing.解析：I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes