【文章內容簡介】 kes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think … What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【參考答案】***試卷處理標記，請不要刪除一、初中英語書面表達1．Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr.解析：Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習作內容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。2．We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member o解析：We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來為校刊投稿，談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱，具體的寫作內容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實完成。因此首先我們要仔細思考這個問題，結合自己的真實生活，想一想平時是怎么做的，應該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個難點。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達出來，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個句子應以簡單句為基礎，如主謂賓結構或主系表結構，然后再變化成較高級、復雜是句型，如復合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整、充實。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內容非常真實。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，句式表達符合英語的習慣。文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調整文章結構，使用復雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。3．In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activitie解析：In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.Our city should be kept clean every day, so it’s bad manners to litter everywhere. And we should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. It’s also important for us to follow traffic rules. We can only go across the road ,when the traffic lights are green. What’s more, we39。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，學校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。根據(jù)所給提示內容可知，這是一篇演講稿，講我們應該如何做才是文明舉止，因此人稱用第一人稱we來寫，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，重點句型及短語：in order to為了，try one39。s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。had better not do ，也可用到should等情態(tài)動詞或祈使句。4．How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myse解析：How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were very angry with me.In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I’ll try my best to do better.【解析】1. 接著正文寫下來，將所給要點翻譯出來，分三部分來寫，寫出“三年所得、三年所失、未來的打算。2. 先翻譯關鍵詞再來組句。在過去In the past，學到了很多知識learn a lot of knowledge, 對某人感激be grateful to sb, 對我們的老師感激be grateful to our teachers，和同學相處得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相學習，彼此幫助help each other and learn from each students, 盡自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上學遲到be late for school不太愛好體育運動I am not good at sports，在未來In the future…，簡要寫出自己對未來的規(guī)劃。3. 由于前面所提三年所得、三年所失皆為過去，所以時態(tài)上要用一般過去式，最后一項對將來的規(guī)劃，用一般將來時。4. 最后一項對未來的規(guī)劃，既是對所得所失的理解，也是對未來的展望。5. 寫句子時要注意人稱和數(shù)要一致。5．How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have so解析：How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve th