【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．（山東中考模擬）書面表達（湖南衡陽）榮光學(xué)校九年級（2）班就“環(huán)境問題”召開了一次班會，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”為題進行了一次討論。許多同學(xué)對未來表示樂觀，但也有些同學(xué)對未來有些擔(dān)心。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇短文。樂觀者的觀點。擔(dān)心者的觀點。你的觀點及你的打算學(xué)生自擬（至少兩點）提示：。、語句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80.參考詞匯：optimistic government 　　take measures to采取措施　private Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years. 【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請不要刪除一、初中英語書面表達1．I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and f解析：I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go there to eat some nice and healthy food with my new hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my school,I hope to do afterclass activities in the free time. I hope these will e ture.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do some sports，such as，play basketball，play tennis，get on well with，make progress，after school，hope to do，in the free time，e ture等。而And I hpe there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. / I hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball, playing ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，可把提示的內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子，最后把這些句子連在一起即可。2．My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing stu解析：My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forstudents so that they can have a better understanding of life and students are crazy about such tours while others show their great concerns.Personally ,I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study of the time,studennts acquire knowledge and skills from walking out of the campus,they can learn through their own experiences and can understand better about what they have learned from textbooks. Besides,study tours contribute a lot to shaping a student’s life values and bee more confident in getting along with also helps students develop the sense of social responsibility, creative spirit and practical ability.Of course,we must put safety in the first place in the course of study tour,which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.【解析】1. 本題為話題作文，給定的話題為My Opinions on Study Tour. 研學(xué)旅行之我見。2. 寫出我們學(xué)校組織這次學(xué)習(xí)旅游的目的, 是讓學(xué)生對生活和社會有一個更好的了解。 3. 介紹學(xué)生對這次研學(xué)旅行的看法，有些學(xué)生表示歡迎，也有些表示反對。 4. 具體介紹本人的觀點。（1）對培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣起著至關(guān)重要的作用。（2）可以通過自己的經(jīng)驗和觀察來學(xué)習(xí)。（3）學(xué)習(xí)旅游有助于塑造學(xué)生的人生價值觀和個性，使他們更加自信地與他人相處，也有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的社會責(zé)任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力。5. 最后要提出安全的要求。我們必須把安全放在第一位。 6. 時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。人稱較為靈活。 3．At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how解析：At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的方式。寫作中學(xué)生需要緊密貼合題干中已經(jīng)給出的要點：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實的個人信息，不單獨和網(wǎng)友見面，使用文明語言，等等。學(xué)生可以在這個基礎(chǔ)上整理自己的語言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實用的祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當(dāng)運用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結(jié)尾提出了倡議，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰。4．Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.In the past解析：Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to fort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】 話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子