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設(shè)下面是你閱讀了有關(guān)環(huán)保的書之后的變化,請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)所給內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。過去現(xiàn)在 ,并回收利用 你認為作為中學生應(yīng)該如何做才能保護好環(huán)境?(至少兩點)要求:,意思連貫。,做適當發(fā)揮。,不計入總同數(shù)。It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot. 【參考答案】***試卷處理標記,請不要刪除一、初中英語書面表達1.Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our li解析:Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講,向同學們介紹一本自己讀過的好書。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:A good book can……,My Life Story by Helen Keller is……,It is about……,we should……,we are supposed to……,let’s read……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我讀過的一本好書的名字,接下來介紹我讀這本書的時間,所讀的內(nèi)容以及閱讀這本書的原因,最后鼓勵大家多讀好書。此處by doingsth, e across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。2.My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the cam解析:My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會或自然 之間的故事,并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗或感受。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài),注意提供的觀點、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文,要忠實于材料,不必擴展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯句。3.There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usual解析:There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usually es on August 15 of the lunar year. On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily. I like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members.【解析】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)話題要求來介紹一下中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。根據(jù)所提供的提示詞語可知,要求介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日:中秋節(jié)??梢詮哪阕钕矚g的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是中秋節(jié),節(jié)日里你通常都做什么,以及你為什么喜歡中秋節(jié)三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。注意在給報社的投稿中必須包含提示詞語中的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語把所給的提示問題回答清楚就行。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達具有條理性。【高分句型一】On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在節(jié)日里,我們會從不同的地方回家,和全家團聚,一起吃大餐。由and連接的并列句。【高分句型二】I like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜歡中秋節(jié),不僅因為我喜歡美味的月餅,而且因為它是一個家庭聚會時間,我真的很享受家庭成員之間的愛。句子中運用了not only…… but also……,還有because引導的原因狀語從句。4.Last year I wrote my own book of poetry. This book is special because I worked with a closeforeign解析:Last year I wrote my own book of poetry. This book is special because I worked with a closeforeign friend to translate some Chinese poems into English,which was very challenging. In order tomake them better accepted and easier to understand,we collected lots of materials from the libraryand the Internet. It took me and my friend one year to translate them.During the process of translating the poems and working with my friend,I learned a lot aboutthe world around me and really got in touch with my soul. Furthermore,I think my English is betterthan it used to be. Most importantly,I learned the value of teamwork. My friend and I weredetermined to finish this huge task and that39。s exactly what we did. I feel so proud of my achievementand I hope I can publish my book soon.【解析】現(xiàn) 在 ,某 英 文 網(wǎng) 站 正 在 開 展 以 “成 就 ”為 主 題 的 征 文 活 動 ?假 如 你 是 李 華 ,請 用 英 語 寫 一篇 短 文 投 稿 ?談 一 談 你 經(jīng) 歷 的 讓 你 很 有 成 就 感 的 一 件 事 情 ,主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :你 取 得 了 什 么 成就 ,你 是 如 何 做 到 的 ,以 及 你 在 取 得 成 就 的 過 程 中 學 到 了 什 么 ?話題作文寫出的句子要達意,完整,語法正確,合乎習慣,特別是句式,謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù),選用比較有把握的詞匯,用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài),注意提供的觀點、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文,要忠實于材料,不必擴展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯句。 translate into 把翻譯成;in order to為了; used to do過去常常做某事5.With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our lif解析:With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has gr