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考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記,請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)1.D解析:Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信,告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ),題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。通過(guò)審題可知,這是要求寫一封建議信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面:首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個(gè)交流,然后引出寫信的目的;接下來(lái)給出具體的建議,依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條,用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái),還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容,使文章更加充實(shí);最后寫一個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾,如希望建議對(duì)你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同,不能按照漢語(yǔ)的思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮,寫完整的句子。如可以較常見(jiàn)的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主,簡(jiǎn)單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。為提升文章檔次,可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文章意思連貫,表達(dá)流暢?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信,對(duì)他的漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分:第一段是與Sam之間的問(wèn)候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)這一話題,并介紹寫信的目的;第二段中是提出的具體的建議,這是這篇文章的主體,所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等詞,敘述條理、有層次;最后一段用一句話對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確,用詞得體。文章中的語(yǔ)句以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句,調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語(yǔ)和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。2.B解析:The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。3.D解析:Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)計(jì)劃。【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。4.H解析:My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析:短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃,文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫,不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫,主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法,不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式,如:e to an end結(jié)束;on the way在途中;get close to nature親近大自然;volunteer to do something自愿做某事;help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事;take part in sth參加活動(dòng)。用了一些銜接詞besides等,句子過(guò)度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句,增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)??键c(diǎn):考查提綱作文。5.D解析:Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀:這是一篇給材料作文,屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問(wèn)題就是寫作的基本方向,然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng):文章采取郵件格式,時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)意連貫,表達(dá)清楚,具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。句型:not only…but also;You39。d better …;I39。m looking forward to…。6.G解析:It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teache