【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【參考答案】***試卷處理標記，請不要刪除一、英語書面表達1．D解析：Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應該怎么做。因此文章應主要分成三段，一個內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復合句；語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達符合英語的習慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。2．H解析：Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。要求從個人外貌特點、與人溝通及學習壓力等方面進行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作亮點：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談談我的煩惱及怎樣處理他們；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學習上的壓力幾方面分別談論自己的煩惱及處理的方式，生動具體，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補、作定語、作賓語用得準確恰當；and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動?！究键c定位】 考查提綱類作文。3．A解析：At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略4．D解析：Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution （貢獻） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護大象。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時注意不要使用太復雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯的文章。5．D解析：Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃。【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。6．H解析：例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my p