【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。2．D解析：One possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文3．C解析：例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個(gè)城市的飛行時(shí)常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息，要求考生對(duì)每個(gè)信息進(jìn)行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語(yǔ)寫作的基本功，需要考生對(duì)常用的英語(yǔ)句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)方式。避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。句型不要都用簡(jiǎn)單句。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個(gè)信息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對(duì)于城市A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過(guò)。對(duì)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出，因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。在比較的時(shí)候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時(shí)，直接用比較級(jí)“higher”在說(shuō)旅館時(shí)用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時(shí)，用了“as…as”等。在說(shuō)選擇城市A的原因時(shí)，用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語(yǔ)寫作水平。4．B解析：Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動(dòng)自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái)，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，書寫時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。觀點(diǎn)分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點(diǎn)。并注意上下文要語(yǔ)句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文。5．D解析：Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說(shuō)明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時(shí)注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。6．F解析：My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：這是一個(gè)提綱作文。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題目要求可知，人稱以第三人稱為主。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)句子來(lái)組織這些材料，在描寫外貌和性格時(shí)，會(huì)用到系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情，要用到一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。另外在寫作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使之上下連貫，合乎邏輯?！军c(diǎn)睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人，包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛(ài)好，有時(shí)也可以包括日常活動(dòng)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。在介紹長(zhǎng)相時(shí)用“be+形容詞”來(lái)描述人物的身高、體重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”來(lái)描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來(lái)介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ，用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來(lái)介紹某人的最愛(ài)。當(dāng)主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)時(shí)，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。7．D解析：Dear Jessica,I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stor