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語的表達習慣.適當使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系.【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。5.書面表達每個人都有自己心愛的物品,相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧!請以“A(n) _____ I have”為題,描述一個或一件你心愛的物品,并談談你是如何得到它的,以及它存在的意義。要求:1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字;2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。3. 語言表達準確,短文連貫通順,80詞左右。A(n) _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A(n) toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析:這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述,要求是進行描述,并談談你是如何得到它的,以及它存在的意義。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的,在討論其如何獲得的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài),在談論意義的時候要注意表達的準確性,避免不熟悉的表達。寫作亮點:這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍,描述玩具槍的時候有適當的細節(jié)補充,例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth(用黃布包著的玩具槍),這里用到了過去分詞作定語,作者還描述了玩具槍的功能(small plastic pills),順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經歷,準確使用了時態(tài)。在描述得到的經歷的時候不落俗套,講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難,父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的,寫作是富有感情的,也通過這段經歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華,表達了作者的期望(I hope I can be a soldier),上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面,這樣的一篇作文是有深度的,能夠讓人感動的,是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。6.共享單車自從2016年在江陰投入使用以來,給人們帶來了諸多便利,受到人們的追捧,改變了人們的出行方式,但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn),是國民素質的“照妖鏡”,請你根據表格中信息的提示,給21世紀英文報寫一篇關于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現狀自從出現,飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢隨處可見,出行方便有益健康,減少污染費用不高,負擔得起存在問題未及時歸還占道擋路你的觀點我認為參考詞匯:公共自行車public bicycles注意事項:,要求語句通順,意思連貫?!澳愕挠^點”一欄用23句話展開合理想象,做適當發(fā)揮。,文章的開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can a