【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 out wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來(lái)介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫(xiě)作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。5．環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)， 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛(ài)美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。提示詞語(yǔ)： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問(wèn)題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述建議時(shí)，描寫(xiě)具體，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及狀語(yǔ)從句等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6．假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會(huì)參觀。你打算邀請(qǐng)外教 Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語(yǔ)： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問(wèn)題： ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材