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s had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題,寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。題目中用問(wèn)題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難,最后取得成功的;最后說(shuō)一下你自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要,發(fā)揮自己的想象力,將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整,用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主,注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但要與上下文意銜接起來(lái)。其次要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維,逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語(yǔ)、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次,應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級(jí)句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,寫(xiě)了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn):首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,層次清晰。短文主要分成三段,每一段主題都很明確,敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確,尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確。文章中句式變化豐富,有簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句,長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。5.書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 要求:、條理清晰、段落分明、書(shū)寫(xiě)工整;、校名和地名等信息;,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。6.書(shū)面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲,你一定既有收獲又有不足,也有許多對(duì)自己未來(lái)的期待。請(qǐng)以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖,寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對(duì)未來(lái)的期盼。注意:。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)言連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think