【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點(diǎn)，第二段要寫反對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點(diǎn)，第三段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見，寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，確定文章中心。注意文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。文章要有層次、流暢。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系，要符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分三段寫：贊成；反對(duì)；你的看法。注意過渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。6．書面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國(guó)筆友對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣,想到中國(guó)旅行感受中國(guó)文化。你想請(qǐng)他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國(guó)東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請(qǐng)他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時(shí)候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。另外，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，因此寫作時(shí)不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯(cuò)。但為提升文章檔次，也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句，以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。7．書面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。請(qǐng)你按照以下提示給他回一封。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________