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緊密聯(lián)系,要符合邏輯關系。【點睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題,可以分三段寫:贊成;反對;你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點要全,表達要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。5.環(huán)保話題是人們最關心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項:,條理清楚,作適當發(fā)揮。,詞數(shù)不少于80。 狀況水污染,大氣污染...... 應對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境(至少兩條)...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經給出了部分提示,動筆先應先認真閱讀提示,確定寫作內容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式,注意在表達不同觀點時,連詞的使用。內容上應注意描述的全面性;語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣?!军c睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹,內容完整,用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然,順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。6.書面表達某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。請根據(jù)下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻譯。過去生活條件差,道路狹窄,房屋破舊。污染嚴重,垃圾遍地。......(適當發(fā)揮一至兩點)現(xiàn)在環(huán)境:政府采取措施來改善污染,城市變得越來越整潔。生活:住房寬敞明亮;許多人搬進了新公寓。越來越多的人有自己的汽車;生活舒適。交通:新的飛機場已投入使用多年。be in use(投入使用);旅游:每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。將來希望……(兩點)要求:1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 短文必須包括所有內容要點,并適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題,介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式,給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在,我們應用正確的英語將這些內容表達出來,并對將來提出兩點希望。審題可知,作文的基本框架和大概內容都有了,需要注意的是在描寫過去的時候,需要適當發(fā)揮一到兩點;還有對將來的希望也需要學生自己發(fā)揮。這兩個地方需要學生們展開想象,合理發(fā)揮,注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結合起來,內容也要統(tǒng)一,符合題目要求,合情合理。表達時,需要注意英語表達習慣和漢語是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語句,而應從句子的整體考慮,使用恰當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型來表達。注意句式的多變,長短句結合、簡單句、并列句或復合句穿插使用,提升文章的檔次。語句之間注意使用適當?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者按照題目要求,介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。文章是按照時間的順序