【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.I’m looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，寫作要點(diǎn)為：1. 志愿者活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。2. 活動(dòng)中做些什么。3. 建議彼得為這次活動(dòng)做哪些準(zhǔn)備。然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。2．Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many puter games. Th解析：Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many puter games. The students have different opinions. They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can municate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must e first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們只要用英語(yǔ)正確的把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)就行。動(dòng)筆前要真人閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目要求，短文是一篇議論文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。寫作中要注意適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文緊密聯(lián)系。符合邏輯關(guān)系。高分句型【1】They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他們認(rèn)為他們的學(xué)?？梢蚤_班會(huì)，幫助他們認(rèn)識(shí)到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利與弊。動(dòng)詞不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the 。高分句型【2】Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外，學(xué)校應(yīng)該定期舉辦有益的校外活動(dòng)。此句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。其構(gòu)成為：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞。高分句型【3】Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 與學(xué)校緊密合作是家長(zhǎng)幫助他們的另一重要途徑。動(dòng)名詞Working closely with schools作主語(yǔ)，視作單數(shù)，因此be動(dòng)詞用is。3．Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museu解析：Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文，要求就學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀的事情，寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。要注意郵件的寫作格式，根據(jù)題目要求可判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。4．Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I解析：Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【解析】這是一篇回復(fù)書信類的提綱作文。內(nèi)容為根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容及自己的實(shí)際情況回復(fù)郵件。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：你一切都好嗎？你覺得你的英語(yǔ)課怎么樣？當(dāng)你遇到麻煩時(shí)，你會(huì)找誰(shuí)去幫忙？在動(dòng)筆前，要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)列出每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí)，需要注意書信體裁的格式，要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；注意表達(dá)的條理性、連貫性，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡符合邏輯關(guān)系；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。5．Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2解析：Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m very excited to hear that……；It is liked by……；it helps……，I’m……，My dream is……，I hope…....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了關(guān)于足球的常識(shí)，接下來(lái)介紹踢足球的好處以及我的偶像，最后介紹我的夢(mèng)想。此處have a very long history, all over the world, take place, take part in, what’s more, be good for, have a gift for等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。6．How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myse解析：How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was n