【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20．（河北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你叫李華,你的筆友Peter 想了解你日常生活中的榜樣? 請(qǐng)你以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,根據(jù)下列提示給他寫一封郵件?提示:1. Who is your role model in your daily life?2. Why do you consider him/ her as your role model?3. How do you feel to have him/ her as your role model?注意:1. 短文必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名,校名和地名。3. 詞數(shù):80個(gè)左右?（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）To: PeterFrom: Li Hua Subject: A Role Model in My Daily LifeHi! Peter,How is it going? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua 【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、初中英語書面表達(dá)1．Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. T解析：Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.Yours FaithfullyJack【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評(píng)選活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。would like to do想做某事； respect each other 彼此尊重； get along well with sb與某人相處融洽；volunteer to help people in 2．Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce s解析：Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國懷特學(xué)校的校長Green 先生寫一封信，介紹他們學(xué)校的學(xué)生來你校參觀時(shí)的活動(dòng)安排以及理由。通過審題可知，這篇作文的主要內(nèi)容有以下幾個(gè)方面：首先介紹不少于兩個(gè)關(guān)于中國文化的活動(dòng)，如打乒乓球、包餃子等；然后敘述安排這樣的活動(dòng)的理由。根據(jù)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)充實(shí)寫作內(nèi)容，使文意完整。整篇作文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型。句式表達(dá)以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、定語從句等，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文主要分三段，第一段對(duì)懷特學(xué)校學(xué)生們的到來表示歡迎（題目給出），然后作者一句話引出了文章的主題，Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．。第二段是文章的主體部分，這一段中介紹了學(xué)校的活動(dòng)安排：打乒乓球和包餃子，并闡述了安排這些活動(dòng)的理由。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。最后一段作者用一句話表達(dá)了自己的期望。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理、層次清晰，語句表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫。3．The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If解析：The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。要求以The person I want to thank為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：誰是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學(xué)到了什么？根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱和第三人稱。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級(jí)的語言，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。4．It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our解析：It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It c