【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)1．A解析：A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開(kāi)描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。寫(xiě)作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍?zhuān)枋鐾婢邩尩臅r(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍?zhuān)@里用到了過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難，父親是通過(guò)努力工作為我賺錢(qián)買(mǎi)槍的，寫(xiě)作是富有感情的，也通過(guò)這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國(guó)的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。2．A解析：As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。主要說(shuō)明要有自己的目標(biāo)，努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，使自己不斷強(qiáng)大；正確面對(duì)困難，積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。：例文用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述主要內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章開(kāi)頭，句意完整，避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，敘述條理清晰。：高分短語(yǔ)：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。3．H解析：Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要求從個(gè)人外貌特點(diǎn)、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱(chēng)形式，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文開(kāi)頭直奔主題：我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄儯缓竺嫒畏謩e從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?，生?dòng)具體，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補(bǔ)、作定語(yǔ)、作賓語(yǔ)用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)；and連接的并列句、并列謂語(yǔ)等等都使短文顯得簡(jiǎn)捷生動(dòng)?！究键c(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類(lèi)作文。4．C解析：My motherWe need love．We also need toshow love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。t have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That39。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛(ài)情深，弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào)，要求以MyMother為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動(dòng)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)；注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。5．A解析：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論，寫(xiě)出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱(chēng)，敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱(chēng)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫(xiě)的句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，不能是漢語(yǔ)式的句子，要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃；make