【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 hanges in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，并對(duì)將來(lái)提出兩點(diǎn)希望。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫(xiě)過(guò)去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開(kāi)想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來(lái)，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來(lái)表達(dá)。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)的變化。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的面貌，這一部分使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都變成了過(guò)去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。文章中語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。2．B解析：Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動(dòng)自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇80100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)書(shū)寫(xiě)。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái)，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。觀點(diǎn)分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn)。并注意上下文要語(yǔ)句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文。3．C解析：My motherWe need love．We also need toshow love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。t have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That39。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛(ài)情深，弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào)，要求以MyMother為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動(dòng)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。4．A解析：A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題，然后分別寫(xiě)出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)：argument爭(zhēng)論；take place發(fā)生；among（三者或三者以上）之間；a good chance for sb對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì)；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮點(diǎn)句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來(lái)，在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論?，F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)（have/has+done）。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會(huì)。動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，疑問(wèn)詞+to do。5．G解析：Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)句：It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，make full use of充分利用， let’s take action!讓我們行動(dòng)起來(lái)6．A解析：例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，但寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)承接短文開(kāi)頭，具體寫(xiě)出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述具體怎么做時(shí)，描寫(xiě)細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。句型：By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish