【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。4．C解析：Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運(yùn)用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點(diǎn)。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。5．G解析：It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋！驹斀狻?，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要緊扣主題，文句通順?！芭懿健?，正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語從句so…that …；比較級do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。”6．G解析：It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。7．G解析：Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。 efforts, our parents39。 support and our classmates39。 help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生動有趣的教學(xué)、三年來的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿，在寫作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，符合邏輯，符合發(fā)言稿的格式，沒有出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。8．E解析：Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語寫一篇短文，號召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個方面來敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱we來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補(bǔ)充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個方面，對中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準(zhǔn)確，語句通順，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也